I would cut off most of those connections. The t is covering itself up, and the L and Y are hard to distinguish with the 3 points connecting there, but otherwise your shit looks like it's going the right direction.
Gonna go back for a better flick still working on them anoy your stuff is fucking nice keep it up fiyt thesecond one is good not digging the otehr onetho aimr work on the r also paint over where you put the letters in there or hatever it makes it look like you don't know what your doing or something huae? bars and simps man.
[Broken External Image]:http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1834/anpiecewallsmallnj9.jpg This is the piece, I think it came out well, except the Y didn't come out how I planned and is whack. [Broken External Image]:http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1741/anpiecesmalldu7.jpg I know this isn't the spot, but I figured I put this in because it's the sketch I used for the piece.. I know the Y is too big, I never see this shit until I'm done, but oh well. any other crits would be welcome. Mr. Yarbles (Neks?) Those throw ups aren't too bad, work on where the drop shadow/depth should be and make sure to fill in all the spots it should be, but it looks like your using stock caps so, not too bad...
It's aeks and yeah I'm using stocks :/ my friends gonna give me some fats soon It looks good man but make sure your y is on the same level as the other letters, also try and keep all your bars the same width
im likin your style just for the fact that its clean but your Y is kinda off and i think the A needs a thicker bar going accross then that but thats just me
Yeah I didn't really notice the A fucked up until I looked at my post, the A and Y are def. off. the Y is horrible honestly... but yeah, I just gotta keep working at it. Word, I like little bars inside the A, but the vertical bars are too slim.
haha I wasn't going to go paint tonight, but I went to ace and they had some old school krylon so I had to celbrate haha
bump... first burner attempt..and who ever dat guy was dat asked where im from..im from houston... and a lil handstyle..
Yarbles-Stick to simples until you can pull out a decent throwup. Andy-I'm loving it Furious-Once again.. Stick to simples, I'm not feeling the letter structure.
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confused on what name suits me better.. irak or mesy, both i think suck FLYT CELR SAVER HENRY - keep sketching and the depth HUAE - work with getting straight letters down then progress from there. you have the right idea ANOY - more wild style kid, get those arrows flowin
lol ye i get wat yall r sayin..it came out better wen i sketched it but my can control still sux...thx for d crits tho...std isnt really much of a crew for me..its just me n my friend and just sumtin we like to say..std "shit that dope" lol ye i know corny but who cares.
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