the lights are well placed, then you need to practice on paper more often in order to have more calibrated letters.
Curious why you writing N.W.A.? If I was to make a suggestion id say go bigger, and give those bars a bit more width. If you dont know what bars are I could explain or find a image on google (or you could). Either way its not bad at all, you have a good idea of what drop shadow is and your highlights are placed properly. Also maybe make the W a bit better, its kindve wonky.
I do not believe this girl in the pic did this ion wanna sound like a dick but som fishy and it ain’t the pussy