bastardo, that shits on point, but who writes bank? theres already a DOPE bank in montreal...unless thats you which i dont think it is...and to top it off theres banksy...i mean come on, and sane, you look like every other kid that graffs, keep sketching, go simpler, and take your time and im officialy kicking sky 5 the hell out of this forum, hes passed the toy stage and everyone knows it, but please, stop by to say hi because i am slightly in love with you. Me and Mf and Anzio should duke it out for toy supremecy Peace you hah lah mah lay layers
He should post his stuff in the big boy forums but he should still stop by and give crits because he is one of the few people that gives good crits.
Oh hell no! sky5 is staying here! We need a couple rediculously good writers like sky5 and tricks to crit the small fries and give them inspiration. He occasionally posts in big boy thread anyway and gets positive responses. He knows he can go, but he stays to help us out and cuzz he's mad humble. He stays Tricks... You'll just have to share the limelight. :lol:
1st piece: is lacking dimention and needs more effects with your color shading and try adding some 3-d effects with some shadowing and a background. also the first two letters seem to be different fonts than the rest of the piece. 2nd piece: add some color if you got it. and the S and A seem a lttile sketchy. i like the bubbles they are are a nice touch however the spray can seems a little sketchy as well, you should lighten up the the shading around the bottle little bit 3rd piece: this one is your best that you have posted. i really like it. All you need is some color in the flames. maybe add a colored outline but definatly add a shadow. 4th piece: keep your size of the letters and the font in mind at all times. it doesnt seem like your pieces flow evenly together with your sizes/lettering however this is a great start. you have alot of potential once you start taking your time with lettering and color your shit will definatly pop. - L!MBO
yeah, but its nice to have sky 5's stuff bumping around in here. and please please please someone crit my shit! please i think its on the page before...i dont wanna bump it because its too large.
invisble asn would get ate up by sky 5 is that who were talking bout? a coupl eof azn's prices are nice especially this certain one but overall they arent too good besides mabye the fill but even then its...ehh. sky 5, draw more and post it man i need some inspiration for seriously.
thats what i was lookin for thanks for taking the time to help. i have very little money and the money i do get goes to helping out my family. i cant get many colors and stuff like that but i do sketch almost all the time. ive been reading these forums for a while and i could REALLY use some help on improving. but keep in mind i have pretty much no money.
the past couple weeks ive been so busy with school, homework, and restitution ive barely had any time to do anything. but yesterday and today i got a chance to do some sketching. just got some prismacolor pencils in, workin on using them nicely. theyre a lot more sensitive than the old ones i used. squirrel char from invader zim: View attachment 221453 dont like the yellow in this one: View attachment 221454 pen freestyle: View attachment 221455 View attachment 221456 View attachment 221457
well any of you kids can hit me up on aim if you ever need to. blastbeatsattack. i can do what i can to help you guys out.
sky your letters are fuckin sick, i especially like the r and the k. that one section though, i think its double o's, it sort of ruins the flow. the rest is fire though
bump [/b][/quote] Yeah truth i would probably paint that now, its lookin pretty much spot on Have you painted before?
yeah i have, i understand u gotta fill first then outline, the only problem ive had when painting is not getting the outline round properly and drips.
sky get that coloured!!! [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8119/binodm0.png first ever one liners . wat yas think?