nice straight letters, just not really feeling the Y too much.

 

yeah, i don't really know how i can draw a Y with style.. never drawed an Y before

 

bump

 

Nicc, in my opinion the name has somewhat little to do with the writing itself because it's all about opinion. You could be a legend and be writing a name that you thought was cool but there will always be at least one person that thinks the name is gay. Most people don't think that a legends name is gay just because they do amazing things with it. I don't really know what I'm talking about but whatever.

 

some sketch in class. im still toy, i need some crit. this is prob gona be my throwie, or bomb not sure. but without the drips and bubbles and shit.

 

i was just saying... wham looks gay.

 

My first post up in this bitch and i guess ill speak some crits nam'sayin

Snif no beef man but those letters are kinda whack define the S better cus right now it makes me think of a worm haha and the I try a captial I maybe but yeah thats all i gotta say to that o and the char makes me laugh but shit im hella high

 

fume, im liking the simpleness, the y's a bit weird looking though
snif, i agree with Sex, not to be nasty, but make your s more s like, but keep the thing on top of the i, whatever it is it looks pretty cool, like a guy with his mouth wide open
sorry to criticise other peoples work when i suck major balls, but its just my opinion.

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what are yours on this?

 

not my favorite style but its alright. the first letter/number needs work either a 8 or P or S.
then the R or B at the end also needs some work. but keep it up.

 

any opinions of mine on the last page?

 

cud sum1 tell me how i cud improve this i no it suks terribly

thanks

BTW sum of the stuff on here is fukin sik

 

fost. i think ur shit is raw.

and sex. yeah i know the S sucks. i changed my name cuz my old one was to close to my birth name. w.e im just sketching for now. cuz right down the street from me is all the frieght trucks and shit, and there begging to be marked up. oh yeah, hows my charac? i use him on my stickers mostly.

and nerd, thanks for the crit, i need it. well, back to the paper for me

peaceZzZz



ps. has snif been used before? , i dont wanna go out bombing and shit and find out im using somone elses name.

 

woops double post.

 

snif is pretty close to snuf.

 

niccsacc that throw in ur sik is pretty sik i reely like it

 

Cope snuff does your body good if your a 50 year old redneck who likes to drive his truck from la to montana with no tail lights

 

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Comments please

 

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some throwies i came up wit, I know there kinda plain but i like the simple look.......any ideas on how to make a piece still be simple yet badass at the same time

crits on thoose throwies

 

this is my latest stuff

simple piece & tag
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throw up
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what do u think