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i kno it only a few letters but crits plz??

 

Why would you go back so far and find this? Just wondering. [/b][/quote]
Just looking for burried treasures I guess.

 

apoc, this is pretty much an all around rule in graf, when letters overlap, 3d is cancled out. never put 3d over a letter, it just looks bad. all around tho the structure is nice...i guess..

 

thanks

 

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i need some feedback on that "E" what should i do with it....

 

just get rid of the stupid extension on the middle bit and itd be fine

 

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crits would be great, thanks

 

that shits crazy i like the color combination looks like stained glass or something.

 

that shits crazy i like the color combination looks like stained glass or something. [/b][/quote]
thats exactly what i was going for thanks allot man

 

Lookin good...

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Yea it's a bad pic and its only one letter but I was trying to change my letters a little so I was just wondering if this was even worth working on or if I was on the right path or not?

 

bumb i would liek critz plz

 

Ya keep on it

 

Yank - With the simple at the bottom I don't think you should have the K curve like that because all the other letters are straight. Keep it up though.

Slushi - Was that directed towards me or yank?

 

aces - i like that S although maybe you should try makeing it wider at the bottom just to see how it looks

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crits?

 

I'm liking that. You're developing more and more style. I can actually see the improvement. The bottom left of the first H is a little messed up but other than that good job.

 

yeah dude you totaly changed from the 1st shetch i saw u do, fuck ur better then me now i'm jelious haha nice work man

 

something for a battle
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i need to get a clearer pic

 

From what I can see it's looking good. The A looks a little like runci's style but I'm not gunna call you out on biting cause it isn't that similar. I think that there should be something off the R that kinda looks like the thing off the W to balance it out a little but still good job. Did you freehand the soldier shadow or did you get a pic?

 

yeah that great progress phish
and that pic is insanely blurry