stick to paper

 

yeah im doing anyones name for practice

 

Those Esko tags are fine, just watch the last one, kinda looks like 'Eska'.

EDIT, I noticed your tag on PerfectDefect, your from NZ?

 

First, Sketch more. Second, that looks like an actual spot Don't hit those up yet. Get a backyard board, and hit that up. Post your flicks in the painted pieces, and ask for crits. Your can control isn't the worst, but your letters need work, and so do your tekneeks mang

 

write overdose :lol:

 

Truth, try write overdose

 

pleasseee dont do quotation marks on dubs. and this is a tags thread

 

Workin on tags. Three differant styles.

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CRITS? Thanks.

 

I liek the last two, but in the last one loose the tail on the L and maybe dont have the top part of the E so touchingness.

 

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Im pretty sure theres a trillion Mars'

 

meh, critique the tag not the name

 

the S seems outta place

 

i agree, try and fix the s to make it match the other letters

 

yeh the S doesnt seem so forced together like the other letters, so fix the S so its more liek the others, or you could just take it it out so your name is MAR

 

so since eveyone is just saying the S doesnt fit, heres my idea on how to make it fit.

tightten up the tops and bottoms of the S closer into the middle which will make the
overall thickness of it smaller. matching the rest of the letters.
if that makes any sense.

 

yo miser...went to the post office today to mail your streaks but it was closed when i got there

im gonna try again tomorrow around noon

 

roger that. i didnt get a chance to refill today but will tomorrow and ill get it out.