try not to post flicks without leavin crits first. thats just rude hoodrich - that handy is pretty sick man, im not feeling the peice as much though. the K is defianately best, but it just doesnt flow together nicely. try and keep all the letters the same style (or 'font' if you will) keep workin on 'er man
[Broken External Image]:http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031716.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031708.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031705.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031702.jpg do these look ight for throw ups.
[Broken External Image]:http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3447/cool014sr7.jpg Makes it look alot better in my opinion.
before u enter that, change these things..... id take away the boxes around the piece. the arrow going thru the N either take it out, or fatten it up. like make the first band and horizontal all a flowing line, then on the vertical bit, make that as fat as ur letters and the arrow proportionate with that. i would do like 3d from the bottom or sumat to but thats up 2 uu... [Broken External Image]:http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5044/dsc01096tp8.jpg done that for a battle and the fill nevr came out too well
nemz everythings pretty good, the fill might be a little much but.. dear lord look at that "toy battle" handstyle....come on man you can do bettern than that
[Broken External Image]:http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnewerererer.jpg summin i done quite quik yh i kno the char looks like the dud frm nightmare before x mas but hu cares neway crits on evrything
[Broken External Image]:http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3816/1000975lt2.jpg the colors are ok, and i know im supposed to keep it simple but i wanted to see what i can do
never do that again! why do we have 2 stress DO SIMPLES over and over again?!?! fuck sakes! go simple you have no letter structure.. and i wouldnt worry bout colouring for a while. [Broken External Image]:http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5044/dsc01096tp8.jpg bump from last page
It looks like u had a pretty good idea about what u wanted to do but it just didnt turn out so well. No offense, but it looks like u were making it up as u went along. Definitely just try and keep it simple. I do like the colors though.
thnx lad! lol well itl give u something to try for [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4914/dsc01097sy0.jpg worth colouring?
couple sketches i did, [Broken External Image]:http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4739/pa200263al1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1269/pa200264oa7.jpg dont really like how the A came out in this one ^^ what do you think?