3D is most definitely off in several places. If you are gonna do vanishing point in the middle 3D, i suggest practicing on simpler letters first. Also, picture it as all going to ONE point (i.e. the middle of your R) and draw ALL lines to that. But, the letters are pretty decent for being more complex. [/b][/quote]
kk thanks

 

Another one.
What do you think?

 

very nice, i cant crit. it though, cause mine are far from perfect. :blink:

 

:blink: looks hella even and Blanced, its sik.

 

Thanks.

 

Very nice, clean work punny. Only problem i have with that piece would be ur last letter. Note how all ur letters are more or less consistent in width, but the end of ur 'K' at teh bottom right is way too small compared to the rest, so i think that disrupts the overall flow. Thats just my opinion however, some people may think otherwise. Id consider removing the end of the K and slicing it off so the bottom of the whole piece remains on the same plane. Other than that, im really diggin that piece good job.

Crits for mine?

 

Qlown, Id have to say the biggest issue would be the size of the letters, in many cases some letters arent as wide as the others, and in the first one the letters all seem a bit to thin.

 

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new name on the top.

 

mostly everyone on this toy forum

 

crits on mine?

 

learn how to not talk like a 5th grader..

 

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nice style man, Im feelin it. :blink: [/b][/quote]
NO! this is why this threads is bad, casue those letters are horirble and your tellign him theyre good, your trying to go way too complex and theyre uneven and ugly, im sorry but work on simpler letters add some flare to them and do simple arrows if ou are gunan do them also dont try extensions of any sort until you can burn kids with your simples

 

pez not much i can say if u know u should be going simpler..

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nemz lookin real good, all you guys can learn a thign or two from this, the addons are on point its clean and all the simple letters look good, the u could use a tiny work i think but looking nice all together

 

fucking nice nemz.
great colours great letters.
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o my word bastardo lol, is that something thats NOT a throw i seE?!?!?

needless 2 say i quite like it, seen the others b4...

 

lovin the colors nems

 

thnx ppl. bastardo, u missed the shadow on ur arrow, and the other arrows shadows a bit messed up lol.