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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. FEN the HEN

    FEN the HEN Elite Member

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    now why is that......hmmm......
     
  2. Bill Cheese of Wheeze

    Bill Cheese of Wheeze Senior Member

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    i like the coloring, and choice of colors.....and the squigglies.....

    thats pretty much it though.

    has potential. keep practicing.
     
  3. ToXiK

    ToXiK Member

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    BouncingSoul, For some reason I'm not feeling that K there. the top right part of the K is kinda ehh.... N seems kinda small too. Maybe if you added some 3-d or drop shadow then it'd look much better. Overall good work.
     
  4. krysnum1

    krysnum1 Senior Member

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    Man, I just finnished ths, i jsut wannted to work on some caricters or somthin, i made this erally messed up. I kept feeling new stuff to put on it IDK, jsut the pills are making me creative, but im not sure if this is ganna look good to me tommaro. im really feallin it just caue i was really into doing this peace.
    Yea wat ya think of it.


    Crit plz/

    [Broken External Image]:http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1038/cci00061qz1.jpg

    man, im trippin right now, im ganna take a look at it anouther time, see if i like it.
     
  5. Z FUSE

    Z FUSE Senior Member

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  6. Qlown

    Qlown Senior Member

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    Like the first one ZFuse.

    Nice colors krysumn1, but the lettering needs work.
     
  7. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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  8. Toyminater

    Toyminater Senior Member

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    ^S looks like the best letter!
     
  9. Toyminater

    Toyminater Senior Member

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    Fucking wicked peice man. The character is great too. Great coloring on him.






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    Something i did last week. Critique?
     
  10. ras

    ras Banned

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    blank wallz = blank minds...

    haha..thats good ;)
     
  11. Qlown

    Qlown Senior Member

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    Blank walls = Blank minds...

    Deep.
     
  12. joke

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  13. ras

    ras Banned

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  14. joke

    joke Senior Member

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    work on more basic letter n dont have arrows change the characters they look lankey n have a word with some meaning

    i chose my word from how im feelin
     
  15. P!P

    P!P Senior Member

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    liked the first one better....but this charac,. is sick
     
  16. ras

    ras Banned

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    i did do the first one but tried adding on sum arrows...thanks for the advice anyways... :)
     
  17. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    bump, some how this got ignored at least one crit?[/b][/quote]
    Don't try to blame that shit on the use of highlighters. It just sucks! Plain and simple. The letters don't have any structure what so ever. Work on structure not colors.

    Will post a sketch hopefully when I get home.
     
  18. alive

    alive Banned

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    if u blame things on your markers, your shooting yourself in the foot, and denying yourself crits from me and many others.]

    its ur own goddamn fault that ur wack. not ur fucking highlighters.

    draw us block letters. u gotta start with them
     
  19. ras

    ras Banned

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  20. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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