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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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    wait is this an exchange now?

    edit:nevermind... :rolleyes:
     
  2. Blix

    Blix Senior Member

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    crits for mine?
     
  3. P!P

    P!P Senior Member

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    one sec...I am posting a couple pics of my handies, think i am improving =)
     
  4. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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  5. P!P

    P!P Senior Member

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    ai15.photobucket.com_albums_a353_phillian0_DSC01308.jpg
    ai15.photobucket.com_albums_a353_phillian0_DSC01309.jpg
    ai15.photobucket.com_albums_a353_phillian0_DSC01310.jpg
    ai15.photobucket.com_albums_a353_phillian0_DSC01311.jpg
    COUPLE PAGES TRYING TO DEVELOP MY STYLE A LITTLE...
    PLEASE HELP ME OUT HERE, THIS IS MY WEAK POINT. ANY CRIT WOULD BE APPREC.
     
  6. .D.H.

    .D.H. Senior Member

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    pip: lose the arrows. i think the style might a a little too plain and curved, but thats just me.
    captain: lose the arrowa an quotes for now. looks pretty ogod, but keep practicing
     
  7. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    Yay!! Perox, it's not a big super letter now! Just lose the arrows and quotes(if they're there too lazy to look) and just develop, but don't go too crazy, just keep working.
     
  8. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    pip dude, that first page is real bad. most of it looks like something a 4 yr old does to impress his mommy so she hangs it on the fridge. i am by no means an authority on this but come on, u can do better then that. u cant say thats not bad.

    now that i tottaly bitched u out how bout some crit. a handstyle is not about how fast u can write it. speed comes with time and experance. theres a form of letter structure in anything be it handstyle, pieceing, throwies, everything. take a look at a handstyle u really dig and bite tha fuck out of it. seriously, copy it stroke for stroke. get it down,(do not put it on the street! its not your style its just an example). then look at it and see how u can add to it, or fix it so its your own style of lettering. but its important that u know, im not saying bite another writers style and use that, im saying do it at first, then elaborate on it, then once your better make it your own. then put it out on the streets :D
     
  9. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    How could i add exxtetions to these
    They say Cez
    ai84.photobucket.com_albums_k18_thebucketofphotos_Picture74_1.jpg
    ai84.photobucket.com_albums_k18_thebucketofphotos_Picture75_1.jpg
    I personnaly like the first one the best
     
  10. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    me 2 except move the z over a little or something its violating ur e
     
  11. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    ...cezr much? I'm not saying you're bitin, just yeah...

    That second Z is awesome though
     
  12. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    I wanna add things like this to it, but i wanna make it look good, not sayin urs is bad but i dont wanna do no copy and paste shit
     
  13. Prof

    Prof Member

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    Sup_


    Need help big time.
    If anyone can help me out or suggest a new name.
    That'd be okay too.
    Open for all comments.



    Thanks.
     
  14. frankgrimes

    frankgrimes Member

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    myusik, get rid of some of the outside lines, and make it alittle less curvy over all. Also, the letters should be resized sorta. that u is really tiny.

    Perox, do it again with a different marker, i dont think that skinny shit is helping u much.

    maybe i should post some of mine, i need crits too!
     
  15. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    It's not that bad really. Make your O a little smaller so it doesn't get all over your other letters. And that last letter, if that's an F, don't make the arms touch eachother, 'cuz it looks like another P. But it's not as bad as you think it is.
     
  16. Prof

    Prof Member

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    Aight. Thanks for the advice. Hot_Pocket
     
  17. P!P

    P!P Senior Member

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    THANKS EVERYBODY FOR THE CRITS!
    my problem is that i am doing it in my lap at the computer. i need a real desk to write on. and what kinda marker should i use??. that shaprie is pissin me off.
     
  18. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    a chisel-tip marker, what else? & crit the person above you before posting an assload of squiggles.

    thanks to the two who actually gave me a few crits.
     
  19. Bombat

    Bombat New Member

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    How the hell do u post pics???... <_<
     
  20. neza

    neza Senior Member

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