Good work soze. Love that charac, you know where you can improve. [Broken External Image]:http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7342/1001299yx2.jpg crits?
I made it just now. Umm it sucks i know.. It's for my girlfriend.. It says Angela is sexy... [Broken External Image]:http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2799/file0008xy6.jpg
wow guys you kno wat's great? how people just keep posting and posting their shit w/o decently or sometimes w/o at all critiquing the people above them..it's just common courtesy ya kno? soo... SEAR- that shit is DOPE! hella cool style. keep goin w/ it. SOZE- keep working on your letters and developing them w/ the blcok things. the karaks are pretty cool. the throw the E is weird..try bubles more or try diff style.. ENIGMATIC- the "one" inthe top rite is bad ho ever the fade on the big letters in prety nice the blue to green. teh 1st letters i don't think has same style as the second ones. ETCH A SKETCH- the E is kinda cool same w/ X the Y loks weird and the S 3d looks a bit off.
well i only stuck one over a guys tag, and another was a tiny bit on a guys thro up. see the black lines underneath the purple tag, that was my tag and the guy specifically wrote over me when the had the whole metal grate to write on. so i put a slap over his cause i didnt have any paint or anything. and yeah, that thro is really toy so i wudnt care if i went over it, which i barely did.
Bump... crit the people above you dude. And yeah its okay. Needs basic letterform work. [/b][/quote] no need to bump it on the same page, let alone after only one post... i agree with the other guy tho, it dusnt fit in to well, as its curvy and what not, maybe make it a basic more block e like the other letters, make it like this: E
PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE LETS SHOW THE CHILDREN WUT IT IS HAHA JUST FOR CEZR....CUZ I HAVENT BEEN AROUND IN A MIN and ill have fresh shit 2marow hopefully
enigmatic, theres a problem with ur piece... theres one thing thats killin it. its that writing on the side that says east side pride. change it 2 west and u will be good 2 go
Looks good arma, maybe focus more on the R and making that a prominant letter would look good (I'd try backlapping it so your first A sits behind and see how that sits for ya). Perspective on extensions is good but might looks nice fatter to suit the letter structure more. I been sourcing new ink h34r:. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438741.jpg I be dropping more simple shit for awhile until I get time to finish some full outs. Here's some canvas work I gota finish and keyline. fenese. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438766.jpg rms'er. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438777.jpg
damn thats goona look real nice once you drop the black on there, im envious . . . (puts head down, kicks a can and goes back to the drawing board)
Haha, thats my weapon of choice too, good old posca, they have some good bombing markers too heres my latest [Broken External Image]:http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1082/p024nl9.jpg any comments?
looks real nice, i like your style . . maybe try shootin the extensions at the ends of your piece out farther and fatting the middle part of the K . . and running a white gel pen as an inner highlight . .
alive i dnt like tht throw 2 much bt the pen free styles are hot 1 of my fist attempts at ne kind of piece <_< View attachment 231793
characters with gas masks are playyeeeeeeeeed out posted this already but it got bumped out by the next post...i realise the n has a point where the others dont other than that crits?