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please post come comments and critisizmm....

 

That's a bite from mr.wiggles.

 

wow eso, biting the exact letters from mr. wiggles on graffiti creator tisk tisk ...

 

Alright, I asked this in the toy tags thread too, but it seems like two different sets of people go to each thread, so I figured I'd ask it here too.

Would it be bad if I just shortened it to "mith" or "mith1"? I honestly thought the S was giving me troubles anyways and the five letters made it just too long to make it viable for quick throw ups.


I guess it's a good thing I haven't done any throw ups with the name or anything yet then, just sketches.

 

finished
i suck at flames.

 

diggin the skull, the flames, not so much.

 

btw, theres a thread thats like "other art/toy charicters" i think you shoula put it in thur.

 

this thread gets more feedback so i posted it in here.
i need to work on my flames.

 

Im in tha prosses of making u a new bomb, what you think so far, should I stick with some aspects of it/ throw the idea away and start from completely new letters?

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enbr's a fine name...and what you saying "thats where i learned my stuff" 3 posts up from where you said that you were gertting critiquued yourself...your characs are nice but you cant talk abtou letter structure if you have none

 

I got hit with the bottom of the page and have a feeling I might not get answered unless I bump my post.

I really don't want to be a biter or anything, so it's pretty important to me to know whether or not this sort of thing is kosher.

EDIT: Well, I just found out there is a writer named Mith in Australia, so that means no mith, but would mith1 still be okay?

 

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CRITZ????

 

does that say wiska?


EDIT : sorry my retardedness didnt even allow me to get to your siggy.... anyways the coloring and stuff looks good. some of the pop outs on the letters have messed up 3d and shape, like the one on the k and the right bottom of the W... but thats just picky stupid shit that doesnt really matter.

 

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for the throwie exchange crits

 

You'll have to wait a while to get Nil's exchange back. I suspended his punk ass.

 

haha i owed him from like 2 months ago

 

-ESO- I really like the coloring and style (though it's a little strange that the only place red is used is in those arrows at the end), but there are a few pop outs and extensions that look a little odd too, namely the one at the bottom of the W and the arrow under the S. The W is because it's the only extension that goes out as far as it does, and the S is because it comes out of absolutely nowhere. Maybe if you had the arrow come out the bottom of the K or have an extension on the bottom of the S, it'll give you that same really dope looking outline (and balanced with the arrow under the I) without the awkwardness.

 

im looking for a battle any body...no beef just boredom

 

HEVN ill battle you . . . .