the one in red looks too much like a swastikas for my liking.. the green looks pretty nice though, i don't know how I can tell you to improve
can`t you just gif me hints or make me a nice tag instead of just burning me down? [/b][/quote] thats not how the graf game works buddy.
i couldn't really see much from the picture above (might be my monitor idk) so i can't really give crit what do you guys think? for a tag i think it's ok but idk
looks pretty good in my opinion.. it would look good with a big juicy mop [/b][/quote] No, no no no no. Alright not only can i not read that i already want to slap you for even picking up a marker. BUT i;ll help ya out with some advice. 1. dont attach the letters, seriously i dont know why you kids do that shit but no thats no graff thats ruining a good spot. 2. work on letters, alpahbet n sheeeit. 3. iuno, keep sketching and work on it show it to some honest local writers n go from there. stay up.
yeah dont worry he writes like mith or something now, we explained that to him hah any crits on this new handy i was working on? im iffy about the e, but my last one was boring. and the e and r arent meant to be connected, thats just how it came out
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A simple, legible (to me) tag. CONSTRUCTIVE crits please . [Broken External Image]:http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6968/kasersimplejq9.jpg Sorry about the shitty picture, I wish my scanner was working.
thats not how the graf game works buddy. [/b][/quote] SO you don`t want me to give tips on a nice tag?
Copie, I'd suggest working on the whole alphabet, just scour these tag threads and see how some of the more advanced toys and pros do their tags and you'll quickly learn the do's and don'ts, the problem right now is that you've just got two jaggy letters with no flow between them. Try writing out the two letters you've got in as many different ways as possible, and eventually one will kinda stick. I'm still quite the toy m'self, but I at least think I'm a pretty keen observer, so hopefully my advice makes sense to you. Also, sorry those other guys are being douchebags, so far I've found there's about a 30/70 split of assholes to helping hands. I just don't understand the asshole attitude, because seriously, none of us *want* to see shitty graffiti, and being a jerk just keeps that shit going. I'd love to see a thread full of nothing but dope work, with a huge group of people all trying to help eachother improve.
u mean like i do ur name and u do mine? im down if u want but what style? every style? throwup? hanstyle? wildstyle? real talk.
keep the e and the r connected. it looks good in my eyes. if they weren't connected it would look pretty plain like - ok u got 5 letters next to eachother and u wrote it funny...big deal.... s'good. real talk.
Meh, I'm convinced it'd look better not connected. Try it and see? I like those dots, I dunno what it is about them but they really compliment it nicely.
looks pretty good in my opinion.. it would look good with a big juicy mop [/b][/quote] Are you insane?