You need thinner markers.

 

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:huh:

 

Stroke - That 'R' Is Reaaaaal Dope

 

Mister fuckin tuff nuts on the internet, i wasnt saying your shit was a bite from that peice just that dude dr.Sex yeah your shit isnt origanil anyone can look up one of his peices and see its biten.
you fucking herb dont get at me i burn you anyday on the streets. fuck internet beef you homo thug. get a grip punk ass bitch and learn to fucking paint then come at me until then step down and deflate your ego.

 

Fuck stroke

 

i always love how the people who mainly bitch about internet beefing, are ingaged in internet beefing.

well anyways, heres my entry for the peeta battle..

 

work on that handstyle ... add some flair ... looks like wanna-be cursive with some lines and dots <_<

**EDIT** This was not directed towards 'Uhhh'

 

Bump!
Can I get some C+C please

 

Crit/comment pls it got overlooked from the business about biting and crap

 

i like that e. actually a lot. but the other letters needa lotta work.
capo-i dont like it much. but just keep working on it. youll have somethigbn decent in a little while.

 

What do you think I should change about it?
And by the looks of yours, I like it.
Its kind of hard to see.

 

yeah. i have an old sony that uses floppy discs. you put them in the side.. haha. its at least 7 years old.

i guess your styles just not refined yet. but just keep working on it for awile. i cant really help you at this point. just work by yourself for a little while.

 

Alright, thanks for help.

 

This any better?
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early thanksgiving sketch let me get some crits, The middle throw was like my first bowser style ever, I still kinda like it. what you think?
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i think it looks fresh budd but if i could add 1 thing it would be to try n maybee round out the dead squares in the middle give it the same curviture as your letters, maybee that might help, but i think its nice either way

 

bowser...to much goin on on that page...i think the bottom and middle peices are kool...and nice turkey leg :lol:
uuuh....great style...



hardley got any crits for this

 

looks ayt ras bro jus usual stuff loose the arrows and define the letters a bit more. still dont like that little E. maybe to a piece in that style of letters keepin it simple like??

i duno
peace

 

g-wah

altho tht p is mad generics it looks hella like copes

and as we all unfortunately know every fucker bums cope