Dude its me Volume?

Its been a long time since I've seen you up here i mean like since 9th gread and shit

 

iLL!

 

you have potential



you can be the new guy that eventually does hollow fills black 3d and lime green outlines

 

Dude its me Volume?

Its been a long time since I've seen you up here i mean like since 9th gread and shit [/b][/quote]
dude you must be confusing me with somone else i dont know you man.

 

Wooord, Bastardo, wanna do an exchange? I'll do a sketch and you do me a throw, I love your throws

 

fosale, your comin along well, keep it up, i see a bright future for you in graf.

 

looking for some crit on the very top one, ignore the tags. thanks.

the 's' looks a bit strange i know, not as clean as i would have liked. the sploches of blue are supposed to be there, i thought it looked cool.

 

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All you did was do your tag with just an outline... :huh:

Edit: I was directing that at Glass.

 

you have no idea how much that means to me.

 

bump

nice throws bastard

 

Meh, I liked that siiimple Bawk you did a couple pages back. That shit was siiiick

 

that smug is nice minus the line going through the u it kind of throws the u off it would look better if it were in the background and might even work well as a contrast if it was a different color maybe red like the 3d or maybe you are right because its kind of part of the u

also you should do sumn with the extension on the s it wouldnt look right without it but sumn doesnt seem right with it im not sure i can put my finger on it

handstyle is no good but u could work with it if u change it up

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cluster of some shit my red was runing out and i straight copied the nibler karak

 

needed some down to earth crits beone, but now its your turn

the middle noes simple at first glance is nice, but a couple things:

1 the n is too curvy, the way the legs overlap each other at the bottom throws off the straightness youve got going for the whole piece, minus the O of course

thr O is real nice and simple, i like the way the top is straight, the E is classic and simple

the top half of the S is good, and then you mix up the direction of it too much at the end and it goes all wonky

i dont like anytine else on the page, especially the throws and your handstyle needs even more work than mine

Peace

 

better than most ppl but i dont really like the e and the left side of the m looks to think face is pretty good tho and the hands are nice but need a little touching up

 

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nice throws bastard [/b][/quote]
Bumping again. That G is dope as hell.

 

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haven't posted in soo long...crits?

 

Like your letters but take away the arrows man... They make it look worse.

 

too many unneccessary(SP) arrows