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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    Sore i really like them but the e on the first ones kinda messed
     
  2. Jrow17

    Jrow17 Elite Member

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    bump.. bottom of the page
     
  3. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    u missed the outline on the bottom parts
     
  4. Jrow17

    Jrow17 Elite Member

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    yeah, the bottom sucked cause if you look, there is a reflection cause i was standin in like a foot of water..
     
  5. Bombers Ambition

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  6. Dtox

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    did this pretty fast a couple of days ago. critz?

    ai138.photobucket.com_albums_q278_mt10201_KIF_0286.jpg
     
  7. SeKz

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    if ur painting wood like that u need to roll it with a white basecoat first, so that the wood doesnt soak up the paint, it also protects against the peice fading in the weather. dont overlap your letters in the handstyle, and the e is like cut in half or something, looks wack. Other than that it looks ok, keep practicing
     
  8. Nyc Sno

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    first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don't over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo
     
  9. eromatic

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    it was more of a vanashing point.
    and if i did the whole bomb you'd see why letters arent the same size.
    ill get a pic soon
    but thanks for the crits
     
  10. FEN the HEN

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    im actually feeling that.......tag is weak tho
     
  11. Truth.

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  12. Deso7

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    its not that clean it needs quite a bit of work im not sure what you were trying to do with the red in it. and it looks like you layed out the truth before the bubbles so yeah what i would do is lay out the bubbles then the truth then do the out line and then detaild work. hope it helped a bit.
    keep at it
     
  13. RemoZ

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    Well since you're a rollerblader I will give you Critz.


    You didn't drip which is good but your shit lacks any structure whatsoever. Clean them up sketch, make the Letters a lil fatter and such. Also lose the squigle shit. At least your trying to practice before getting up.
     
  14. taine

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    Ok, tell me. did you throw up on the wall, or is that spray paint.....jokin homie its not that bad, well good can control at least. work on your letter structure and on the e, connect the bottom to the top, but any ways your off to a good start
     
  15. Blix

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    the only reason thers no drips cause its on wood come one it absorbs so much paint drips nearly impossible
     
  16. fredom-writer

    fredom-writer Senior Member

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    GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  17. Bombers Ambition

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  18. ---CRoR---

    ---CRoR--- Elite Member

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    nice way to get OE up homie!


    OTC 4life!
     
  19. statar

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  20. uhhh

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    first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don't over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo [/b][/quote]
    i actually like it, if you clean it up itd look pretty nice.
    i like how the letters arent the same size, but thats obviously done on purpose.
    hes trying for a throwie style thats a little different then generic buble throws, dont bash him just for that.