[Broken External Image]:http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9051/grhdr003dz9.jpg Tell me what you think, I know i'm a toy, but i'd like some advice, and if anybody in Toronto is interested in starting a graff group, let me know. Thanks!
desr your d looks like an r, yells they are both pretty good im not sure what to tell you... i cant decide which one i want to enter into the battle... [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5601/im008748vy5.jpg or [Broken External Image]:http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/1859/causrbattlewk3.jpg
Desr, that throw could work if you fixed a few things. The D, the extension makes it look like a lower case R. Smooth that out. The line on the E shouldn't go all the way across. The S would be great if you didn't swirl out that line. The R is perfect though. Yels, your usual style. Not much for me to say but I dig it. Grape, your G needs work and the rest of the letters shouldn't have those bulging legs. Uhhh, to be honest not really feeling it. I prefer the Letters to be a little more straight and legible where it matters. You shouldn't go crazy with em till you get to the outer edges. Freakshow, looking fresh. Really loving the first one. Don't like the second character but the eye on the R is very nice. Secor, I'd say round the tops of your E, C, and R and it would look pretty tight. Working on some slanted block letters. Need help with the D. I have the basic shape sketched there but I need a way to differentiate it from an O. I don't wanna really round it or cut it too much on the corner cause I think it would take away some of the flow the straight edge across the letters has. Any ideas?
bump. alberts i like. uhhh. don't listen to him. [/b][/quote] bump again. i got bottom of page and still no comments. bfc- im not able to comment because my computer isnt loading.
freakshow -- diggin the top one, like that char on it over the bottom one. colors are clean, but it'd be nice to see dropshadow on that. someone also mentioned the way the S comes up at the back, which looks awkward. sleet -- the way you have it so that the letters don't connect on the left, like on the O or C doesn't sit with me right.... they look incomplete. BFC -- likin it, and how the bars all are being consistent and even with each other (like the levels of them, how the Y's and A's bridges are. as for the D, the red highlight edit alone might work since (it looks like) you're trying to make all the letters square, but maybe the yellow edit also would work [Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8615/moooojt9.jpg enuf. -- its really inconsistent and the addons and stuff don't go with each other. simpler... see how the A is huge and the rest of the letters are much smaller? your 3D is off too, esp. on the A
I think I got the D how I want it. Threw on some 3D too. I think I'll color this if I come up with a good fill and color scheme.
can someone give me some inspiration for Sludge? maybe just some simple block letters or just some advice.
ill do an exchange with you, if you want? I'll write Sludge you write Soze or Sezer. i'll up it tomorrow.
shits dope.. ... way to go Nyda...u know what...cula the 3d in GREY and add an Orange outline..like this.. View attachment 243108 and.. i started using blocks for my letters...hopefully ill " Progress alot faster "...
Thanks Mith, took your suggestion on the orange, but went with a green for the 3d and a dark blue for the regular outline. Noone to crit, damn. I'm very happy with this one. Looks fucking ill. I might even get a better picture of it tomorrow or scan it. Looking at it makes me really want to go out and paint it.
[Broken External Image]:http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/WakeUp.jpg Just joimed today. been looking here for awhile now. one of the first of the new year. somethin quick. not my name, but ill defiantly put up some of my stuff soon. tell me what ya'll think.