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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. stemONE

    stemONE Member

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    bumbing for more crits,any pointers wud be greatly appreciated

    PEACE.
     
  2. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  3. stemONE

    stemONE Member

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    yhanx for the advise that has helped me heaps,and yeh the only reason it isnt very symetrical is coz yeh im to lazy and i didnt take my time,but yeh thanx for the crits
    PEACE.
     
  4. stemONE

    stemONE Member

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  5. revolt92

    revolt92 Banned

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    Dont do a capital I with a dot above it and sketch in pencil first then go over it.
     
  6. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    out of the 2 orange R's i like the on on the right best. which 1 did ya paint?

    neway as per fuckin usual i love ur work haha
     
  7. beefgerky

    beefgerky Elite Member

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    steezy.
     
  8. ras

    ras Banned

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    ^^ nice...like the top one..

    that Sky shits nice

    still focusing on my LETTERS just my LETTERS :p ...i fucking hate seeing peices without colours.. :( :( :(

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    Crits..

    oh i tried connections...i think someone said dont be scared to try connections

    Thanks ! ;)
     
  9. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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  10. kicklip9634

    kicklip9634 Senior Member

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    dont mke the letters go into each other like that
     
  11. ras

    ras Banned

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    its called a CONNECTION.. * rolls eye's *
     
  12. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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    hahaa, he also sed that he was tryin them out, it not goin to be perfect fool!
     
  13. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    nah ras, thats not a connection, you're over lapping your letters and just showing breaks in them, which, unfortunately makes it look uglym kickflips right, space out yur letters, so you can still see the entire letter, but try extensions or something to connect them, but keep everything you do still SIMPLE
     
  14. HeiSk

    HeiSk Banned

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    new throwie, i dont like it its pretty old i made a new one, but i wont have my camera till m0nday so yea il post the cool one monday

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    that is just a try to add faces to my throwee
     
  15. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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    i like the first letter alot. keep workin on it and u will own that shit.
     
  16. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    BUMP!!, ras its good to do sketches without color so you can really see how your letters look, color can hide the faults of your letters sometimes, anyways I don't like the overlapping of letters, for some reason I never seem to like your letters eh just my humble opinion.

    Heisk-interesting throwie, looks kinda weird, its good tho.
     
  17. HeiSk

    HeiSk Banned

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    was this to me or someone else?
     
  18. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    dont know what to do for an s ill add 3d later
    sumoe thats really good
    heisk dont add faces and itd be pretty decent
     
  19. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Sumoe, Pesk, sky5.- Hot shit. Feelin the Pesk throwie. nice simple too.

    Heisk- It's got charachter. (oh snap! that's like one of those..I ferget, but you feel me.. :p )

    Whahappen- It's simple. Keep goin with that.


    Since no one was up for a b-book swap last night iI did one for Tricks, cuzz he did my name way back in the day, and I never repaid him...
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  20. molotow_15

    molotow_15 Elite Member

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    old english style..

    dont have the letters touching each other it doesnt look very good with
    that style of writing, make the letters smaller and work on the proportion
    and then you can make them bigger once you have nailed the smaller ones,
    work on the 3.D make all of it equal and straight if you have problems doing that
    use a protractor and a ruler to get the angles perfect, better still dont have
    3d have a drop back instead it would look alot better..