id say go back to simples. theres too much stuff sticking out... Cezr. that last one would look crazy as a roller or on a freight
this didnt make it in time for the poll, but whatevs what do you guys think? also cezr, that bottom sketch is fire. i love it man
Might look more balanced if the extension on your R flicked back down in the same fashion as your C does Novella. Your A and U look really well balaced together and overall it flows out quite nicely. Dig where that E is coming from Cezr, would be a nice panel. This one's work in progress for now, been lazy and am sticking to quick shit until the weekend. There'll be a circle inserted above the P which is why it looks kinda unbalaced atm. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9377403.jpg
start of by doin letters on ur keyboard, none of those squiggly lins and w/e, gotta keep ur perspective! just do simple block letters, and get ur name down in teh simpleness
yeah i've done some simples block busters and what not but i want THAT one progressing also straight lines are hard for me because i have really bad shakey hands so yeah (i mean acctually spraying it not that i was drawing staight but it came out like that ^^) but yeah
stop coloring. u dont need the color. u need to focus on the letter structure. start doing blockbusters. i dont give a shit if uv done them before. you need to do more. practice your straight lines, b/c that wobbly shit will not fly. if ur rele that desperate, for now use a ruler or a straight edge, while u work on your pen control on the side.
the whole shit is wack, i'm not even gunna bump it for the sake of this page. but on the real, if you wanna make it better, just... practice alot. And read the how-to threads.
uhh - its godd but the a kinda looks a bit exaggerated asb - i like your style a lot keep it up albert fish - that kinda reminds me of bapers style unless you are baper.. yarharhar - i love the throwie. i wish i could od that haha these crits are for a couple pages back i forgot that i was lookin for my post and i saw the flicks a couple pages back.. <_<
crits on this please... trying to keep it simple- [Broken External Image]:http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/kin2.jpg trying to have an urban-like background- [Broken External Image]:http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/kinwallscrawl.jpg
kin, at least you're starting on straight letters (the dumbass that I am refuses to..)... but try to get some style in there. You have the concept, but don't bother adding color and 3d to something that isn't awesome or else you're just wasting some time. But yeah, look at some handstyles, some classic graff.. some fonts.. and manipulate those letters. and to post something of my own.. just something i drew up while watching 'Piece by piece' [Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/l33m/IMG_0809.jpg
Which one do you prefer? ANd i mean just the shape not highlights or something and ik would like some crits