do a fill in and say goodbye to whatevers behind it.. it looks like its all shit behing er any how..

good S, can't fully ,make out the A but i would overlap the top piece with the middle instead of tucking behind... the E needs a bit of work and Is that a C??

 

(maybe go back when you have your letters a bit better and do and black fill with gold outline...that'd be sexy eh?

 

crit my throw

 

is that a fucking school <_< .......

 

this is like the 5th time im painting and like the 2nd doing a character, and tomorow il post my first throw up, so here is the character i did, in like 5 mins


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ahhh sorry didnt read that part

 

The character is pretty nice man, wish it it was on a cleaner wall though lo so i could see it beter.
Wiska - im also really digin your throwy.. you do that on yoru school?

heres what i just came in from you doin.. crits?

 

that first one, the s should be equal with all others.

last one, don't have wavy lines for the S.

 

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i'd leave the spraypaint in the garage for a while. just start blackbooking, go back to the basics, basic letters. and where are you that it's so nice and sunny out?

 

crit my throw [/b][/quote]
No it was a library..

 

lookin fine and clean but i think that arrows are needlessly [/b][/quote]
ok

anyone else crits ?

 

i think you should work on your letters
if you want to be better on walls JUST PRACTICE
about sketchnig
you have excellent tutorials topic

 

bump for crits

 

CRIT BEFORE YOU POST YOUR OWN!
wiska looks nice but the a is real low
hask the very bottom if the only decent one lose all the sharp corners and make the letters proportional...
aser you arent ready for one liners MASTER reg throws first and nice tag
sone the e is leaning too much and that left side of the n is huge
cesa the bottom of the c is weird like..idk how to explain ill show you later
kerf the e is huge and the f is small stick to paper
kon? you letters are disproportioned the is too big and dont make the n go down so much
color....BLACK BOOKS ONLY STICK TO PAPER!
yea...

 

first post let me know what u think

also how do u post pictures?

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Nice! I like it. The White outline is a little sloppy
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You can find the URL underneath the picture

 

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Yo ASK, im diggin it, but the money sign looks wack. just my 2 cents.