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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    i like the p and y tho.
     
  2. ICER

    ICER Senior Member

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    bump 4 critz

    freedomwriter-ur letter structure is ok. but i dont like the arrow in the last letter! and your shading is a little off.

    newborn-keep working on your character and go to simple lettering
     
  3. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    apic20.picturetrail.com_VOL1202_4129875_8826419_120527200.gif
    read it and you win!
     
  4. ICER

    ICER Senior Member

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    shit i dont a clue on wat it says
     
  5. stemONE

    stemONE Member

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    okay, all i can say is that the shit above me its sick,which i could sketch hlaf as good as tha,i kno i will one day if i keep at it...well i hope :D
    -BIGel-okay thats nuts,love it lots,flows like a hot knife threw butter
    -ICER-im loving the bottom one,the top pne is madd and all but yeh the bottom one is much better i think,i cant give you crits coz im still shit lol
    -freedom writer- i like that simpleish style but you gotta loose those arrows im not liken them aye,but yer not to bad,cept for the S doesnt really flow
    http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/233/comethrowieri8.jpg
    my throwie skecth...ignore the dot at the end i fucked it up :lol:
     
  6. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    stemONE, nice to see a new member giving crits.

    When you make a post see those boxes up top that say font and all that shit? The one underneith that says 'IMG' click that then past in the URL for you image in the box that comes up and then it will post the acutal picture. Just letting you know cause 90% of the people here won't bother clicking the link.

    But the throw. It's nice and simple, it's a good start but I'd say spend some time just generally cleaning it up. Like loose some of the sketchiness of the outline, get the width of the letters even and then it will be a nice simple throw.

    BiGel, starts with an 'S'? I don't think it's the nicest piece ever, being a little unlegible even for a wildstyle and your 3D is off in some places but it is aesthetically pleasing.
     
  7. nase7

    nase7 Senior Member

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  8. [breakout]-azer

    [breakout]-azer Senior Member

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    cool style uve stayed simple and that good

    but by the way i would give for crit be4 u ask crit.
     
  9. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    bigel that is dope looks like some 666 shit u shuld post that in the main thread.

    gona put this on a wall soon as it stops snowing (wtf????)

    View attachment 249659
     
  10. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    ^nice piece.i love the letters

    can't see whats wrong,its just good :)
     
  11. near

    near Senior Member

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    nice stuff as usual caser...bigel i think i see an S as th fist letter thats it tho also likin the civik stuff mainl the first one

    heres stuff i did the colouring looks so faded in the picture no idea why but here they are for what its worth

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v285_j_w_a_t_s_S3010699.jpg
    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v285_j_w_a_t_s_S3010697.jpg
     
  12. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    sweet near is bac!!!

    im likin the second one man that is a fresh red. dun like the lil e tho but lookin good.

    change up of the handy?? looks alright man
     
  13. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    sema
    or sena
    or sewa
     
  14. Snuff

    Snuff Senior Member

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    looks like sena
     
  15. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    not even close.
     
  16. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    illegible isnt exactly a good thing ya kno?
     
  17. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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  18. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    same
    samw
    samew
    seme
     
  19. ICER

    ICER Senior Member

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    i digging that piece caser! and i like the first near piece but the second one not so much
     
  20. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    congratulations that none of us can read your work...im going to be baking you a cookie this afternoon with "you're my hero" in icing..smh..its nice though, whatever it is...bring it to the big boys thread

    caser nice simple, i wanna see that painted, near im feelin the first one more as well and that handstyle is fire