chili maby you could try and attach the E aqnd the S and seek thats a nice peice man its really clean
seek...that is very clean and the simples are great, but the k seems a little far away from the last e imo chili...those simples are hurtin, heres a couple tips; when you sketch do it with blocks(like on your keyboard) also dont get ahead of yourself and try to add things too quick. o and dont listen to no1r, connecting the e and s would not look good at all.
FUCKING AWESOME liking it alot the n's sorta big though.... :unsure: haha rep its good but fix the r so it isnt so big and wide
tern...that throwie is sick, get out and paint it shift...SIMPLES, that looks bad. start out by doing block letters LIKE THIS and dont add extensions,bits,w.e. untill you have simples down.
shift. dont bother finishing it. start over but this time loose the arrows and keep your letters the same size. your letters seem to get skinnier as they go. its a bad habbit. but its easy to get rid of with some patience.
shift..., its un balanced the best its got id say is the coloring its nice but looks shitty due to no letter structure and i wont finish
Shift- it does look really unbalanced, try going simpler. If someone could critique I would appreciate it... [Broken External Image]:http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j50/ghr7891/Sketch.jpg The color scheme and coloring job sucks, but it was super late last night, but whatever.
Nice shit last page qwil- for kea [Broken External Image]:http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/4521/keanx2.jpg
fuck that shit is sick, and the pick above me is fucking cleeeannn heres mine, changed my name to baser:
battle entry [Broken External Image]:http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4213/picture003gw6.jpg xsajdox i like that alot except the arrow on the f hilo i dont like the first one but the second one is cool
Bump! Xsjadox- I like it for some reason, really clean, just not feelin that F its to loose, its all over the place, and the extensions on it really dont flow. Borat- That piece smoke piece is ok just keep workin on those letters, specifcly on the S and the O And your other piece i am not feelin it, letters in my oppinion are horribal. Evak- Work on your letter letter structure, and 3d. Shift- i actully find that piece very attractive , just think you should make the letters like your "S", dont like how most of your piece is so choppy. Esko- Its clean just work on the letters, specificly the E, it doesent go with the piece Whathappend- I like it, just maybe work on the V Basic- Go to block letters, and work on 3d
[Broken External Image]:http://spb.fotologs.net/photo/27/31/126/ekso_one/1171213875_f.jpg Few sketches in to this name, any crits?