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not feeling the letters much.
the r is way overlapped and just over all, dont like it much.

those hand are soooo fucking sexy though.
like,
words cannot explain.

 

Ok well, maybe I went a little bit too harsh on ras his ass. But listen, I can take crits like a pro, but i just want to know why he doesn't like it.

And a word to ras. Listen dude, there's a difference between style, and just not being able to draw a character that well. Style comes after being able to draw normal people a bit. Characters have faces, arms and legs and so on. You must know how to draw it. Pff i'm done teaching little 10 year olds a lesson about drawing characters. You guys'll see something nice of me soon. Btw, can I also just post characters in this thread I make. Whether or not it's digital work? I'm a bit out of blackbooks at the moment.

 

Awoke-I like the overall style bu the letters need sum work, slean em' up a bit and just work a little on the letters. Those handies are fuckin' fresh though, props for those.

 

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thing i did for someone....first piece i did in a while

 

seems like you still have some structure issues, not sayin' do simples but you need to work on your structure a bit. <_<

 

Yeah. No letter structure.

 

totally i know man

 

havent posted in awhile got a new pic and a couple characters

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any better?

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character ideas tryin to play wit any good

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for the characters imma re-draw them to make it look like the monkey is hittin the pig. and for the piece do you guys think its any better than my other stuff, i know i gotta take the extension off tha k

and theres nobody to crit so ill come back after theres people on here to crit

 

not really likeing the simple but i like the monkey, maybe make him a little fatter.

anyway

 

i like it stonk only thing i can say is maybe make the leg on the r a tiny bit bigger but its very clean nice

 

stonk i like it i think that the leg of the "r" should come out like the leg on the "a"
kore there two things i have to say to you and that is that your "r" kinda looks like a "b" and get rid of the thing on the top of the "k"

 

ey people i was jus wonderin were yall get inspiration fo ur tight ass letters...ive bin tryin to lukk at other peoples work and nit pick off them...not a bite...kinda a mini bite...not the full style...


Random quote pimped out...--> weed plants...THEY'RE GREAAATTT!!!

 

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this is still rele rough and i no i need to clean it up a bit but befor i did that i thought id see wat you guys thought

 

Dim - lose the fucking add-ons.

 

ras you wanna do an exchange if ya do pm me...or anybody eltse pm me if you want im bored as shit and wanna practice some new letters too

 

fuck mr.lefty that looks sweet dim

 

i like this simple except for that F, but i like what it says even more

 

This is basically my first time doing a throw of my name. I'm terrible, but here's what I got so far:
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Air - i like both of them but i like the right 1 a lot more
Dim - i think it looks good just do it again without the erase marks