umm no he's right, there isn't many add-ons but you should get rid of the ones you have, and that "M" needs some serious work. <_< :blink:
I like the you fucking whore piece lol AIR - I like the red one, but the top of the R looks a little weird to me. [Broken External Image]:http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/4446/img2184mediumsu0.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/319/snifthrowuptb7.jpg freedom writer- i like that a lot, good job. try to color it with some light colors. slEEt- i like that style but the S is too simple and so is he O, in my opinion.
air- yea im diigin boft of them the only things that looks wierd is the right legs of the r's freedom-writer- im diggin everthing but the S maybe because the bottom bars overlappes the top bar idk but other than that good shyt sleet- nice simples crits?
[Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5342/img0001qs7.jpg Simple C. For a battle. Thought I'd add a taste of Bruce to it.
ok so here is some stuff for the bs battle some 3 or so weeks ago, i cant be bothered to upload any other pics.... ive really progressed this style since then any1 wanna exchange?????pm me if you do[Broken External Image]:http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/471/picture057ud8.jpg
sezer - that hulk is nice, you could run a lil darker green around some of the inside black to help shade/snazz it up a bit mezn - im sorry to say it man but that 3d is HURTIN . . check out the new 2 graff thread on 3d vanishing points or just do straight down or striaght right 3ds for now maybe . .
AcuTe1-StaSHBoy that would be a nice simple if you fattened up the bottom prong on your K (to fatten up the end of word in general) and curved the top of the S down so it doesn't look so strait man. The handstyle needs some work, I'd maybe leave handstyles off your stuff until you've practiced them more on their own. Edward"Sezer"Hands that hulk is looking cool.
Fuck out of 4 pics posted only one dude is onto it enough to post crits. Fuck the rest of you lazy bitches. Sene, The 'S' is ok, the lines to be a bit more parallel, same with the 'E', this will come with practice though. The 'K' doesn't flow at all. Think of the letters in your piece being like a font, they should all have similar properties. Like if you saw a poster with the first 3 letters of a word in Arial then the last letter in Times New Roman, it wiouldn't look right, know what I mean? To fix the K you'd have to square up the bars a bit. The colouring isn't too bad, try and use a lighter fill if you're going with a dark outline. The bubbles need a bit of work too, try and bring the little circles closer in to the cloud, it looks a lot better when the majority of the circle isn't showing. The handy needs a bit of work too, but I'm not gonna go into that cause it's the BB thread. Whole car steez. I could have done better but I don't really care. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch30.jpg
SEZER-those simples are...DOPE!!! i like them alot,they turn me on lol yeh loving those simples... MEZN-Mmmmmmm not liken it sory.maybe if you straightened up ur letters and didnt turn them on their side just yet...wait a bit to do that k,that wud make it look much better for a start...and ur 3d is WHACK!!! if you cant draw strait down...egt a RULER and line it up and drw it straight down,would look much much MUCH!!!! better. LEVANS-YEP YEP YEP!!! im liken that style a bit aye..but i think it would look a bit better if you bunched up ur letters a little bit..but other than that she looken nice CASE- im liken those simples alot too.nice and i like what you did it on.looks way cool :lol: keep it up