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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Big image size is BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGG!!!

    It's hard to check your letters being so big,but looks alright
     
  2. stemONE

    stemONE Member

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  3. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    from what i can see stem it looks quite nice all i can say is try keep the width of the bars in your letters consistant for example the left side of the c or g is thicker than the bars coming in on the right
     
  4. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    what the fuck triple post sorry guys not my fault
     
  5. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    from what i can see stem it looks quite nice all i can say is try keep the width of the bars in your letters consistant for example the left side of the c or g is thicker than the bars coming in on the right
     
  6. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Yeah,not bad.. I don't like the O for some reason though :/

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    ^bump
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    ^Tried something different,turned out crappy :p
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    ^The P is a tad le fucked
     
  7. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    stem throw that out and dont go to mr wiggles.biz to do your graffiti,
    XSjadozx on the other hand keep that shit up sun, lose that wierd indent in the top righ and bottom right of your B, keep it clean like the other letters

    Peace
     
  8. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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  9. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    Give crits to other people ^^ !! oooh

    Go simple...

    Xsajoxoieoloz...i like your A's
     
  10. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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    People don't read my other post, i gave crits to both the poeple on that were on the same page as me.. thats why i said "CRITS?!"
     
  11. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    Fab that shits lookin pretty good just keep doin wat your doin ay.

    i done go to skool atm so i been fair bored n sketchin quite a bit, i tried going all out with some wildstyle type shit and he only letter i like is the S haha the rest is wack as. got a few simples aswell so yer havent posted pics in a while here ya go.

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  12. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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    nesk- those are mad dope, try coloring in one or two of them with a nice choice of colors. people are going to tell you to go simple.. idk why it doesn't help me at all.

    Xsjadox- i dont even know anything bad to say because those are all ill... except for the FAP in the second picture, the F looks like an N try changing that a lil.

    StemONE- the letters are good, but the O is kinda ugly because it's too fat and your letter arent really mad with straight lines they sorta like bumpy.
     
  13. [breakout]-azer

    [breakout]-azer Senior Member

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    her some skectes i thru together of da half term hols they coloured wid coloerd crayons caus i aint got ma markers with me on holiday so they pritty shitty.

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    crits?
     
  14. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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    stop doing those bumps on every single sketch you do, it doesn't look good they way you're doing it. the lines aren't even straight. in the first pic you overdid it with the lines
     
  15. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    bump to da next page
     
  16. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Skeam- I like that bottom one alot, and the first one i am midway about it because their is to much happending in it. Some of the add ons just dont look right. But either way good job

    K, so this is one i have been working on, i really fucked up on the E which really pisses me off, but what ever. I personally feel its one of my best piesces lol :) What you guys think

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  17. Lemon

    Lemon Senior Member

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    Skeam- Ill.


    Acen- Maybe work on your A? It looks a little out of proportion.

    P.S. I like how you're keeping it simple. Keep practicing your basics like your doing now. Too many people starting out try to do wildstyles, but don't know how and end up making a pig's shit out of a perfectly good piece of paper.
     
  18. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    That Skeam shit is amazing..cula that..and try it in the big boy thread..
    Breakout..go simpler mate :(

    sooo..trying sum new things..like different tabs....differnt 3d's...connections...( i think there are loads of connection oppertunities with Aimo ) ... wider bars..trying to make it flow / idetnical ... diffrent letters..and shading etc. i know the cross hatch shading maybe off lil .. its bcuz i wanted to emphasise (sp) it ...

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    Crits..

    Thanks !! :p
     
  19. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Nice.... I like it.Mith? :S :ph34r:
     
  20. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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    ^^I was just about to say that, looks exactly like his letter style.