[Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/characters1-1.jpg shitty shit shit shit. (secks. not socks) might as well just stick it herr too. crits if you will.
stemONE- the top of the Z on the second one looks to big and the S in the first one should be more like the s on the second one but i like that E on the first one
Stemone, just try and use some outragious colourin to bumb it up. And, try and make ur letters bigger and more slicing in detail.
No...Loz Emiltino...your giving him the completley wrong idea... <_< ...none of the letters are any good...the addons look like lil bumps...and i hate the structure..dont waste your colours..and do s i m p l e s you have some potential
Yea the paint cracked so i decided to make it the theme lol.. this was done before i painted it as a proper piece. Oh by the way anyone willing to sketch me a throwie that i can use?
Notl liking the connection to the O anc C.. Trash....love the kracks..and the letters...just do summet at the top as kraZZZIE SAYS so..sum political shit..bored " Give me the fucking crown..iv stood outside this place for 15 fucking years..freezing my tits off..sweating my fucking balls off..whilst your sat in this dump...on your acient wrinly fucking arse..twiddling your thumbs..whilst that big eared basterd kisses your fucking arse..and what do i get..SHIT ! " View attachment 255170 Crits..
Says BAIN tell me wat u think cheerz [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6792/picture1ol1.jpg
ive been wonderin sume, what do u use for all ure fine black lines in your pieces? because the prismacolor marker dosent go that skinny. [/b][/quote] for the really fine lines I use 'Sakura' Microns, really good pens (sizes .1, .3, .5). Alot of people have been asking me that lately. edit: Trash-looks good but too empty. Aimo- I kinda like the face on the Queen, it is the Queen right? ODESONE-looks like it says "Saih", make a simpler one and I'm not really feeling the curves on it. there's my crits bitches.
TRASH lookin good real good one crit tho attach the s too the h becasue all the others are just chillin together and leavin him out he get lonly man lmaojokes but attach em ok and peaple say my bubble letter simples should be block simples so tell me what you all think witch is better please and crit thank you very appriciated [Broken External Image]:http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture321.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture325.jpg
I'm a tell you like this, if your hand wasn't so shaky the letters prolly wouldn't look half bad, why the hell are your hands so shaky is what I'm wonderin'...work on that(less shaky hands). edit: also the "b" looks too small compared to the "e", work on your handy alot...alot.
the letters are ok but don't add arrows yet simple character i made fast: View attachment 255187 A...: View attachment 255188
Southpole that A has bumps that dont make sense. And only bring it about half way then cut it off parallel to the letter on the vanish point 3-D. You understand what I mean? Freedom writer good letters, no arrows, youll learn to add them strategically which is not on the end of your letter. Sabe sketch blocky bars for all your letters. No curves yet then as you get those bend your bars then do add-ons, right now basic block bars. Bain the B is too curvy compared to everything else it looks like a S but I see where your going, work with it. Aimo that one is my favorite of the elasticos style but I still hate the shit coming out of their faces...nice story line though. Trash man sick stuff, but add something up top and put some colors that will make that shit pop.
Thanks Zep.. Torn..have you alreaddy posted that A...hm...do all your other letters like that..on there own..and see how tthey turn out.. Sabe...id say..do simples..like..SABE..but..what ever.. Freedomwriter..whats with the the dot on the S...lose those arrows..and the little bumps on the ends of the letters... View attachment 255195 making my karaks more life like.. EDIT.. CRITS ON JUST LETTERS..PLEASE THANKS..
sabe2 : Try keep the width of your letters equal,and maybe try lose the lil extentions in the beginning Aimo : Nice character
fap2, looks clean man [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/9378/hpim0883qp4.jpg crits for mine? (not finished)