I like the steez.. not to keen on the piece though Quik simpler simple i done today [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/50000000654f56b/1/23/ItoWfROH4z_F5SQGK7skyBb1Rc3N94Ok.jpg crits ??
isreal - not really feelin it looks like a super rush job Asen - i like it the A reminds me of the H guy named House uses Hsal - likin the color choices like the gold on black View attachment 262845 any crits?
ahaha..your sig is awesome ^^^^ i actually like that Z..too.. Fredom..whut you onabout..leave characters..?..i aint done no karaks.. <_< .. the throws dont flow..the S is phat...the K and P look like a load of shit..the Y is okay.. View attachment 262846 reposting this..as i have nothing else to post..and its a new page..could i have some opinions on the Fills..
I don't feel like outlining anymore and I wanted to post a flick so... Ehh View attachment 262847 I'm going to actually color this one. The letters are going to be green, the bubbles I'll make gray and the dropshadow will just be shaded with a sharpie or something
have you boned her yet? edit:too....bouncingsoul easy the s looks awkward and thin pie the i has too many extensions kspy the letters really dont have any flow or common shape for the throw
Bounce man really looking forward to that...Nice color selection and I'm actually feelin those bits, usually I dont like em. Aimt- I love that piece, the letters are nice, and it flows well, the only thing that isnt real great is the I. but still def. fresh. Zion- you know what your doin for the most part but I would still practice simples for a little while..(i say that because of the I) Still looking good. Asen - A's a little small, but nice simples. Smooth man goo SIMPLE....crazy is not good...Even wildstyle, has style...start simple. Freedom man - AHHH I'm loving everyhting on that page...very nice. Trash - Dude the only thing I could say is the lines crossing on the R and A but your trying to flow with that H, honestly, I think its a really fresh through, color one and add a forcefield, I wanna see it. Maybe even go out soon? your can control is siiiiick. Ok new piece, I've been sick so I havn't even picked up a pen or pencil, but here we go... before I ink it, what can I fix? Anything? accepting all crits...
Fredom..i am focusing on letters.. <_< ..uggghh.. hence months of simplisitc blissness..boo yah..ugh..im tired lmfao at Wappen..bahahahhaaaaaaaaa wut does the word fresh mean..that youve done somthing different..and its like..fresh..new..i donno :blink:
Pye, the only thing I dont like is the P, I only wish you would extend it a little more...other than that I love it. and On mine, I just moved the 2nd extension down on the y too the bottom bar...
EDIT: ugh since my other post of crits didn't come up i'll do them again...: applepie: yeah, i agree - change the P. it doesn't look good like that. zep0: loose the arrows. the arrows don't really flow with the sketch IMO. freedom: loving the throwups man, but change the P. [Broken External Image]:http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3471/forkatiehsalhw5.jpg for my mate katie. very quick sketch.
zep0 that peice looks like a tag dont no if you were trying to get it to look like the or not if you were it looks good but if you want it to look more like a peice you should probaly lose the connections between every thing
i dont like calling bites espicially on a loved one(bouncing :wub: ) but dude,your B, is totally Bosoe's B [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9716/bosoedsya4.jpg