nice color place D BAG

 

yeah mate lose the pokeball

 

some recent stuff...crits appreciated

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i like the colors on the first one, its the only one i can see, but i think you know this already but it would look so much bettter if your letters were all the same siz, and i think make it really big too that would be sick

 

i like the color

 

yeh my mate pointed that out...cheers for the feedback

 

what do you mean its the only one you can see?lol

 

bump for crits..i know the r is too big on the first one

 

rend you got some good can control once you develope your letters more your going to be dope keep it up

 

alright, but what do you have any tips on developing style on paper?

i've been trying for a while now...

 

post your sketches in toy black books and yooll get tipps there

 

Bigel...your throw has potential I think.


Unique....not bad. Colorful anyways lol.

And let that fool keep writing Sane...don't tell him to change his name. He's not gonna make it anyways.

 

can i get some feed back on these? pretty new.

 

the throw is stylish...get a better picture.

 

agreed. virtuallynameless is pretty clean to man... ugly letters tho

 

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lower case R's, especially that one arent recognisable enough for me, looks too much like a P. work on can control for the shadow fills and the outline goes soft in a few spots. colour combination is pretty nice though, dig that blue.

 

purolator has beef .. for no reason

 

clever and thinking graffiti! in them ways i struggle