bump? [/b][/quote] Theres an AMEN in the Baltimore/D.C. area that's been writing for a long time, but other than that i like it.
whooaa... hold on here... I like this shit. I like it alot. If Atesk isn't in your town, I'd keep that name and run with it. You got some reeal talent holmes. Keep it poppin and keep comin back!
ok, i think im doing something wrong because its turnin out like shit... so i left the bars up so someone can correct me
[Broken External Image]:http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3600/toosicknw0.jpg aight 1. the blue areas are where you're tryin to do addons, extensions. don't even bother. 2. the green area is an example of where you made a good bar, but when you traced it you added some weirdass squiggle and fucked it up. 3. red is where your bars were fine, but when you traced it you decided you were gonna piss around and not follow the bar. for example, look at the pink corner in the lower left of the pic. that's a beautiful 90 degree angle. then the orange is where you traced it, not following the bars to the letter. do some bars. don't even trace them. i mean show us the basic sketch.
look man, honesytly your not gonna get good at graff overnight you gotta put in work, it takes months even years for your stuff to get to be looking good. its like joining a football team and never have played football before then thinking your gonna be thee allstar captain after a practice. now to the crits, lose the extension on the right bar of the A. then that will be a decent letter. its your best letter overall in this peice. look at you keyboard and see your R, notice all the way through the letter it has the same size bars, keep the bars the same widths, lose the lumps and bumps everywhere. for the last letter, im guessing its a I but i could be wrong. lose every single lump and bump so it is the same all the way through. for example the top bar on the left side of the horizontal bar it is fat, and after the horizontal bar it is skinny, it doesnt match up. same with the lump on the bottom. basically yit went from ok to bad, remember what you did in the A and tryo to do it all again with diffeent letters if that makes sense.thats it i hope this helped you.
you will just know. itl suddenly click. youll have an idea, and itl work. ever smoked ganja? its kind of like that. the first time u dont get high, but u get kind of lightheaded n dizzy, so u think to yourself like waaaat? is this it? you know? like, wow, this isnt really worth all the hype. but ur rele just not sure if ur really high or not. but then next time u smoke ur like daaaamn, im high no doubt. it just clicks. you know.
bumpity bump bump, nothing really to crit, i gave a huge one to toosickkskillz alredy.guy above me, the u and l are the best letters, the o is not too bad but its a bit on the fat and chunky side. just keep sketching and itll come
kinda. try doin that, but with slightly thicker bars, and do your lines a little lighter so you can go back and change things a little easier. and try to keep your bars at an even thickness.
s3oul-ur tryin to make ur edges as blocky as possible...don tdo that left the bars on my new name krayz wat tha fuck am i doin wrong...dont pay any attention to the paper...its the only paper i cud find... View attachment 266851 SORRY ITS SO BIG...AND I KNO THA R SUCKZ ASSSSSSSSSSS :angry:
KSPY: you got nice colouring there an ur on the right lines. looks like ur startin to stylize it a bit on ur lonesome anyway, so i say just keep goin with it. dont relaly no wot else to say to ya man, ANTEUP its the right idea.. keep the bars the same width.. just keep doin it more. naturo nice sylization. its all solid man.. u havent got a clue wot that character is or why hes got a pink arrow in him but i dont dislike it mante. whos next for a quick shant pen exchange before i go to bed?
Aha thanks man. Btw fredom-writerm really feelin the first thing cept extension on the leg of the K doesnt fit well Imo. Wihtout it itd look beter
make your letters thicker and more parallel. Why do you have that in your sig, do you think its impressive to be "today's top 10 posters"? gayest thing ive ever seen.