funeral - erm, make the f the same size as the rest. graff doesnt have capital letters and the n kinda looks like an R, other than that is looks cool. AYTE - looks really shaky. cant remember if i have already posted this, [Broken External Image]:http://aycu16.webshots.com/image/14615/2005452162530057286_th.jpg (click to make larger) anyone up for hte team battle?
totally agreeing here. most of us here grew up without a forum to get help from. i live in a small country in a small town where i didnt know anybody that did graff (im 21 and still dont have any writers as friends, my own fault completly). i had to learn it all by sketching completly alone, probably one of the reasons why im still toy as fuck . if you dont like the community here, go sketch alone. on the other side, to most of the people posting here there's only 2 advices to give: dont ever pick up a can and paint or do blocks. [/b][/quote] skillz the way you talk id be thinking that graffiti never even existed before the internet did. nobodys gunna put a pen in your hand and draw for you, you gotta figure it out for yourself period. and about this forum not helping toys, that is toooootal bullshit. this forum is easily the best on the web for toys, go to 12 oz or visualorgasm and post your shit and see if they "crit" your stuff for you, cuz they will rip you limb from limb.
I am trying to improve my stuff so if so you can u guys tell me if im any betetr than when i first started posting? [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture043.jpg
just looking for some feed back.......dont know if i like it my self [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9229/graffeetee051iv9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1967/graffeetee052cj6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/2639/graffeetee053jz5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3070/graffeetee055pz6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5320/graffeetee056nk9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1025/graffeetee057wx3.jpg thats all!!
AYTE its looking good just next time make the lines light soit wont look so sloppy pen sketch batlle im doin with my boy(shake) other then the fact the letters slope down word any other tip you guy got would be cool
so far lovin it sky 5 [/b][/quote] I like it but all the arrows are going the same direction... I like it when they are all going different directions
/\/\/\/\ lol, but dude may have a point. shake - dont make the ends of the letters so pointy, try rounding them off. self - some of those arent bad, i like i know the pic i posted before was really small, [Broken External Image]:http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8830/119dg9.jpg there you go.
sky- that sketch is fire krazzie- I love that style man la coka- I'm feelin that throwie just messing around with bars. I'm bored, and this is what I came up with. crits would be appreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1885/img1561gj7.jpg
krazzie, remove the y from the Y - i can see why you put em in letters that has a hole in them like r and e - but it looks strange on the 'y' (probably wanna make the E non-capital when using it as hole in a small e) and look at the 3d on the slope part (bottom) of the y, can you see the 3d not fitting completly? lines have to bend like the one its supposed to create 3d on
dizzle, i'd say get rid of the last extension at the bottom of the s, and it will look much better, all the other letters are looking good though. Ink that shit.
SKY likin the peice how do u make the arros look so natural lol i suck at arrows usuallt i hate them too but its looks pretty good with youre peice finally found a trowie tht did justis too the r and thek [Broken External Image]:http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture1.jpg Some think i fucked around with i think it came out ok [Broken External Image]:http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture349.jpg
Serk...stop trying to do wildstyles. SIMPLE. Either perfect simple pieces, or work throw ups, but whatever you do, don't try doing wildstyles yet. If you've never painted before, and you go out the first time trying to do some wildstyle shit, you are gonna end up making a mess.
lol i have painted before i ahve too go too court i actully went too day no joke i have 5000x4 pending wright now