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the 2 handys at the bottom , crits?

 

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Love the Oh No and BDK, and the tag too, but I'd try to complicate it a bit now...Dunno if you see what I mean..

 

wut kinda markers did u use on the book???

 

g.smooth- not really feelin it. too much happenin
remoz- im likin ur style

 

Bumpizms

 

Bumpizms [/b][/quote]
crit others before u ask for crits urself foo!

but im feelin it. get rid of da underline and make the letters da same size

 

Yo man I did crit others, I just didnt add it to my quote. Check it on the page before.

 

then-i like it even with the underline....
and when the letters arnt really the same size....
but thats just me

 

Cama nice simple style i'm feelin that

 

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Crits..

 

I know this blows



some advice on how to make it suck less would be awesome

 

ya....tell me wut it says...

 

Crono

 

new tags....
new lime mop-kicks ass
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