its like..the out line is dead..slowly done..like you can tell..as when you go to outline with the purple..you stop..let the ink bleed..then go on..and do ti again..creating a very rough unclean outline..ten again..that could be your style/...then again..i coudlnt really care...as the letters are okay..
the u and the m on this are not the best ive seen from you, the left half of the u (especially the top) seems to be leaning the wrong way, but that s could be my favorite yet. i like it how you lead strong with the S and finish strong with the E in your more recent pieces. it gives your stuff a great sense of proportion and balance. i also like the extensions on this one way more then on some of your earlier pieces becuz they're not overkilled, just enuf to give it style, but not look forced. fuckin hell for your age your unbelievably talented, if i were you id look into art school after you graduate. good work.
thanks a lot man, for some reason it was hard for me to do a good "U" and "M" in this one, I still got a little bit of writer's block... but yeah, I am lookin' at art colleges, but right now I'm a Sophomore and next year I was thinkin' of going into my art program, you pretty much take all art classes, but my dad isn't really into this art shit, he says it's hard to get a good job with art as a major and I should focus more on academic shit...anyways thanks again. How old are you?
Dizzle D: Work on your flow more with the letters. Make them fit better with one another. [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7264/p3170022fo0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/502/p3170023hs1.jpg Critique on my letter structure? Working on my throw up on the top flick and a "hyve" piece on the bottom.
Torrent..pretty decent uugh..For Sir.Serbia Mr. Ensr Aka Bohemain Basterd MSE etc etc etc. View attachment 268273 with the super kool coffee stain..and my amazing handy..and my silly gay style.. <_<
Torrent- that last ones pretty ill, except for the middle part of the E, it kind of hooks downward and makes it look funky. my opinion. and what do you mean by make it flow more, I mean I understand what your saying, but how so? Aimo- that is fire, like always, love the style
I know i suck, but i hgave nothing better to do then upload a bunch of shit pics..and show the world.. [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1199/graf134mm5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5512/graf133ju4.jpg I think every day i get worse. [Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7992/graf132ec3.jpg Ensr:Your Fist e is really weird, And if you dont like a letter(as it seems for you "S") drop it and get a letter you can do fluently. Hyve:Im thinkin im alittle bit too toy to say this but you should make all the letters the same size.
This things banging, love the colors! BUT...WTF is it with the teeth... i dont like it at all!!! [/b][/quote] i dont mind the teeth the piece is sick and i like the way your style has prgressed i dare say the m is wearker than the rest and i dont like the horns on the e but other than that its fire sick job on the fill as always
yeah..actaully..the middle bar structure on the M is weak..Sume..also the U..i dont like how the bottom bar undents upwards..kinda like a W..i always fort that... BS is dead tonight a full on hardcore hard pressed freestyle ! View attachment 268294 crits
i know i suck.. and i didnt go simple..but heres what i did today ...crits please [Broken External Image]:http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/15882/2003301167142099810_rs.jpg This turned out like shit..just wondering what u think of the d and i if i used those two [Broken External Image]:http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/12958/2003374021688680007_rs.jpg =[ =[ help meh... im strugglin.
thats great!!! lol j/k but maybe wen you get a littl e better you could come bombing with the crew or something i dont kno no promises pen sketch i did in school i fuked up the drop shadow and the O's [/b][/quote] envoy- im not gonna say shyt to you anymore cuz you dont listen to shyt abyss- chill wit all that wak shyt do simples amtwo- good shyt i fukes with the 3d plz crit everytime i post i always get skipped neva get anycrits plz crit
aimo- 3d's dope, letters are kinda rough though. good concept, just kinda rough execution. sumoe- shits fresh. the shark ish is dope. stay up envoy- the blue and black one is the best. look at the letter structure guides in the tutorials thread. use the blocks and stay simple.
shit sume! that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE!!!!!!! Ker^ half arsed alfabet might finish temet kemos exchange with psilo says talia ssorry to dump all this stuff on u but i got my camera fixed
Abyss take every ones advice. go simple. eske some of the letters are messed up like the B and K. I dont like the extensions either.
abyss- tutorials thread. go much much simpler, keyboard letters. eske- shits alright. the M's the best letter. just keep the bars in proportion and keep sketching