Sezer - bad ass steez. but try and make the arrow come out of one line if you know what im saying. F.R.A.T. the extensions are abit odd (especially on the coloured M), and the 2nd e is really strange, doesn't flow with the rest. swap it for a capital e maybe, or turn it some degrees at least... Aces - the cracks in fresh looks strange, but the letters themselves are good, very barred if you get what i mean but nice letters none the less (maybe too barred some would say) some shizzle from today, just simples: eks scie(n couldnt fit :<) Scien
Aces- I don't like the letters or cracks/indents on Fair and Fresh but the rest are hot. Especially the kesa/melo, those are fresh as hell, I love those simples. Only thing is that I thought the K was an R at first. HuntingLOLs- The overall feel of eks is nice looking but the letters would look better if they were the same size and not connected. Scie is nice, I'd just unfatten the s a little bit and lighten up that e. And lastly, scien looks really good. FRAT- (top) Looks good, I like the M more than the rest. Only thing is make the k bigger, and let it flow with the rest of your letters. On the bottom one, lose that ugly ass arrow on the K. I like them though Whynot- The S on the second one down is decent, but that's pretty much all you have going out of those. Try to make your letters more creative.
yo huntin lols do you live in toronto? your stuff is nice i like the simples i messed up the orange simple with the arrows
nice colouring on the first one mek, and i kinda like the e that goes bigger but its a really bad m in the throw and the arrows on the 2nd are way to wide on the pointy parts - if you wanna do flat arrows like that do em like i did mine (just better ) do it real fat in the start, do small lines on each side and do the connection between those close to the fat bar, but not too close ofc. and nah, im from denmark
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GEKS, you probably wanna crit before posting next time - your letter structure is off, way to thin at place (the r particular). and i dont like the symetrical bending the letters does, last one is the best tho, pretty clean colouring... the outline of some shizzle i just did: its pretty sloppy but wanted to try some more letters on 1 page
reposting for some crits sorry aout the quality, webcam.. huntinglol's - like your style man claro - work on your bars a bit other than that lookin good
your a's right side is weird^ entry [Broken External Image]:http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4314/picture051rv3.jpg cartoonish characs [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8486/picture049kj1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/6488/picture050xu6.jpg
dormntwork i dont know,,, make them taller? [Broken External Image]:http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6180/untitledks7.png is this good
science nice simples im likin it what u guys think of this just meesin areound i like it it looked better in pencile tho [Broken External Image]:http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture15.jpg
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dormnt - as said make letters taller, and more linear, if you use bars they are way too round. seak - dont bent your letters that much and make then abit fatter (remove all extensions, basically do block simples ) SCC - looked better only outline the extensions are weird, hold back on those. outline is too fat for those letters, or that size of work i guess whahappen? - i cant read the throw
seak dont bend the letters so much and try to keep it a bit simpler i reckon and it would probaly look a bit better
coloured last sketch - piss tired but i couldnt be arsed to go to bed envoy, dont make such blockbuster
ok know it sucks but only ben writing and shit for about a month so any hel pwould be appriciated!!! FIRST color ever just got the markers..... and i SUCKED comment!
hunting lolz- thats fresh shit man. panik - not too bad mayte, stay up. [Broken External Image]:http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1199/120jk8.jpg hump de bump. crits?