haha...o shit...that was a good laugh...the ONLY thing that ive seen u do gud is that same damn throwie, over, and over, and over... o and i said LUKK at tha BARS, i didn't say put bars at the end of you letters and itll flow, learn to read u illiterate dumbfuck
Amkah- The final wall plan is fly, it's just that the top right bar on the k is the only thing going backwards. It's not that big of a deal though. I wanna see it once you paint it, I'm excited. View attachment 270128 Crrriittss?
haha...o shit...that was a good laugh...the ONLY thing that ive seen u do gud is that same damn throwie, over, and over, and over... o and i said LUKK at tha BARS, i didn't say put bars at the end of you letters and itll flow, learn to read u illiterate dumbfuck [/b][/quote] Now tell me how your really feel...
[Broken External Image]:http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6782/p1010079pg4.jpg 3d style...just need ta throw an m on it and im done! garbage down the way- actually decent man, try doing some 3d, i like the letters personally, and everythings the same height....well done wutchagunnado-fresh, the k looks the best to me but what do ik
Now tell me how your really feel... [/b][/quote] how i feel... i feel depressed... my wife (i dont have one) left me, my dog (i dont have one) got kicked by an arabian, and my pet monkey (that i dont have) ran off with a guy named Michael who offered him some candy then...raped him...no more monkey... i hope that guy (who i jus made up) got crabs...may his balls itch...the end D :huh: <_< <_< ) <- my multiple personalities... GARBAGE- dude i love! the straight EEEE!!! finally!!!
oh snap buddy this tighttttttt like a virgin .. [/b][/quote] Dont paint anything on your wall, you change your name too much. Just make a canvas with paint pens or sumthin then when you change your name, it'll be easy to change it out... :lol: I'm just messin with yea, I def. love this style more than anything you've done. name not so much, but the letters flow nice. Throw an O on and it could be AMKO like AMCO from cartoons!! Kidding. <_< Dig it man, keep it up. fuckthatgame I like it alot, its just going to be hard to get it all symetrical like you have it with 3 letters, I like the style though and your executing it nicely. Keep workin on it.
amk - i think the K is too hidden because of the extension bringing the left bit down and kicking right. instead, you could have that bar coming straight down then kicking to the left and then adding those little things that you have on the right sticks of the A and M. also, the right leg of the K, i think you should have it horizontally coming out, without the slight curl upwards, dunno...it kinda bugs me. but yeah, your style has really come a long way. have you got your paint yet? eas - nice, good structure and bar-ism 3-d it! straight down! mwahaha. something me and my mate did in a graphics lesson... [Broken External Image]:http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/7223/124dy8.jpg we also stuck 2 A2 (or A3, i dunno which one is bigger after A4), and did 2 pieces. then my teacher tore it up. bastard.
[Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9053/img0124te8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1507/img0123yv2.jpg crits on these i did in class amk i like that peice rele clean krazzie_ammo thats dope keep em coming
dim - when you make bars make it a clean line. make it clean by going fast. try to make your letters the same size proportionally. they'll look alot better and most of all just mess around with your letters. ras - idk man, i never feel anything you do. but if you like it then keep at it. and this thread has been run over by internet toys that talk shit like casa. it pisses me off when toys dis other toys shit when we're all toys. theres reason we're here. i miss people that gave in depth crits and that actually cared about helping people like alive and uhhh. but it doesnt matter, because no one takes em seriously. half the cats in here come on BS for a month and then call it quits. graffiti isn't something that you get good over night, it takes hours and hours of practice. *end rant*
yea i just was testin the marker dim...and ended up doin some gay handy haha....but yea thanks for the crits...ur piece is lookin good, the r is lacking a little bit tho, maybe drop it or try lower case rs
krazzie-nice simples, and the one in the middle of course is a beauty. You should punch your teacher in the face. Dim- I enjoy your "D" and "I" on the top one. M's left leg is too skinny and the middle is too fat. Bring the bottom right leg on the r in to the bottom of the loop and you should be ok. oops almost forgot...Fuckthatgame- they're nice just make the letters fatter. View attachment 270151 Sketchy colored 3d.
dim -- yeah, clean it up and keep your proportions. keep playing with your letters. the extensions and addons aren't great but I understand you just gotta keep playing around till something sits right. krazzie -- hotness fuckthat -- alright, be wary of your 3d. letters are skimpy. garbage -- alright, don't like the empty space between the E and A. ras -- yeah, I don't really feel your style but it's not like there's anything technically wrong with your piece. I just don't find it that visually appealing, having the same repetitive bar(s) in your letters. [Broken External Image]:http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5898/20070423samp1epenfreerd2.jpg Bumpaloo
thats fucking nice.....^^^^ [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/graff014.jpg....crits????