lol no worries letters a pretty nice except that little "spike" on the first M prong lol...with a "weaker" fill those letters may look dope and try a stronger darker outline with a bright inline to make the letters stand out more.. **edit** those throws are seeeeexy they dont belong in toys forum
[Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5836/picture003tk9.th.jpg and this one [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7373/picture001hp3.th.jpg didnt get any crits lovin those throws frat-yeah change the fill in and it would look sick
the second one, iuno y but i like throws that r level, but dont listen to me, my throws r fuckin shit
the second one, iuno y but i like throws that r level, but dont listen to me, my throws r fuckin shit [/b][/quote] the one on top cause its very funky and different
top would be a nice bomb to take more time with and drop a nice fade or multicolor fill while the second would be very sexy to just do a quicky white/black/white!
the second one, iuno y but i like throws that r level, but dont listen to me, my throws r fuckin shit [/b][/quote] both, or either one... so much steez in two little throwies...it's fuckin' amazing. now that I look at them more, I do actually like the bottom one better.
but the second one is kinda wierd cause the R and S have spiky tops and the M and E don't just my two cents
I like the overall look of the second better but the letters look better in the first besides the "S".
yeah you're right but the E in the second throwie is way too generic and throws it off a little with that steez and the same goes for the S
oh wow those throws are straight fire bastardo. wowwwwww. my eyes aer like watering. anyways heres some shit i did in the last 3 days. no peices. dont be a byotch bout it thogh i havent been peicing (or coliring anything) for a while... FOR HOMIE View attachment 274147 FROM MY HOMIE View attachment 274148 ALL MINE View attachment 274149 View attachment 274150 View attachment 274151 View attachment 274152 View attachment 274153 View attachment 274154 View attachment 274155 View attachment 274156 View attachment 274157
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that's damned inspirational. how long did it take you two to progress from that? [/b][/quote] I started hmmm November/December of '05... So I've been writing a bit over a year... Time actually flies... Before I really thought about it, I estimated I had been writing for roughly 10 months or so... Weird. Just have fun with it man
bastardo - your throws are crazy. i love them. maybe add more of a color explosion. trying out new names. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/mpale2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/mpale1.jpg not muh-pale. its im-pale. as in, im going to impale you on this blade. why do i fucking ruin 3d's all the time?
i was lookin at the first one and went what the fuck i dunno what it was but you tilted one of your letters and it threw everything off. anyways its okay. i like it. and bump mah own shit for crits.
so should i just keep them all going in the same direction? i was trying to pull off the same kinda thing i did with that fetus sketch. but theres not really a concrete vertical letter to transition the slant like with the T of fetus. maybe the A. i dunno.
yeah keep them all straight and in the same direction. youve got blocks down well man, you should expand. i dunno, what do you th ink of my shit i just posted? yes, no, maybe? oh and your 3d isnt off.
i like the top one here a lot. no other ones really caught my eye. not bad though. your handys are kinda weird. i dunno, maybe i just can't appreciate them with my toy point of view. but yeah.
bastardo-yea!! represent for the 14 yr olds lukks tight...i like the bottom one better CRITS WOULD BE NICE View attachment 274205