yaeh, pink dots can make "thin" lines if you hold it close and move fast, i like using german fats for throw outline. some move the can abit further away when doing fill then
Fill in one direction. Like side to side. Your fill looks like you just colored it in randomly. Makes it look sloppy.
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Karma - Your shit is always SICK AS FUCK!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Make - Your fill is wacked out man, but then again I still get shit for my white fills, like they said man Gotta force yourself to fill in one direction side to side, edge to edge. Feel me man. I do like the form. M is cool. And geto. (sigh) Try and stick to the simples man, you probably heard this a hundred times. Simple is better for your starts. The green force field, should be "attached" to your letters rim. I got my first roller pic. Pretty in pink lol. (I know the R is wacked.) View attachment 274809 Crits.
^^^^bro that shit's fresh man. keep it up. View attachment 274867 any crits on this? haven't painted in a few months.
eskoner - ill, keep it up. gift - the black sux all over...n what is that on the bottom of the r? crits on this...im aware of my N being 2 big...its my 1st painted piece besides tags. [Broken External Image]:http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/Photo13.jpg
kin i dont realy like it... well done but the whole thing... when u look at it,, try and bring the letters closer i'd say. and work on your handstyle... a lot ..... but i like the white highlight. gift ... good letters (xcept the r.. and realy nice fill i like the black on the inside.. and the outline sucks, looks like u rushed it.. would look realy sick with a clean ouline
another quick one , done the same night as the white one -clockwork i like the roller just needs some shadows
someone told you before, but you didnt listen. whats the point of comin here if you dont take the advice thats given. when you fill go from side to side, not all over. and stick to paper, cause that throwie is wiggidy wack.
the N is bitten...i know it is...that is bitten..i dont know who from tho...if it aint..then DAMN...why dont ALL your letters look lke that
The ban piece needs work. Take that bitten N and rework that one. And fix the b and a. So.....Hit the book is what I say. Its average son. Not horrible but could use work and be somthing badass.
it's obvious he bit everything but the 'b'. the 'a' and the 'n' are pretty common though so i'm not sure it would be considered a bite. but it is obviously way above his skill level which means he directly took it from someone else's throwie so i guess it can be considered a bite...sure?