Stim...I like it except the I is a bit small....compared to the others..even with that x there....besides that i like it....maybe the shield could have a bit more uniformity to it though..here is a pencil something i did around 10 today...before my school went all lockdown....
stim - nice work keep it up and you will get somewhere but i dont really like how the z is on a angle keep them all in a line Hazex - good work not sure about the thing on the a of the second peice it kinda makes it look like a h Boke - great, love it... dont really have anythin else to say hes one i did to test some new markers... but i didnt think the pencil would stand out so much:
I dunno i just thought..hmmm one bar..bent...would like like that kinda....kinda like those american troop stickers i fucking hate lmao i just dont like the stickers...not the troops part...here is another perspective on the yaito deal...
deadpoolzerwork on you handy lots and lots, it will help your peices trust me, the only decent letters are the O and Y because you actually followed your bars, do that for the ait
meh........... there's alot of people that are good with pieces but the best handy they can do is simple letters..... and some the other way around.... take c3zr for instance. he rocks some dope handsteez but he said it himself that hes not so amazed with his style.
hha kay your a clown :lol: but yeah it does look like that cose- use bars to construct your letters, they will look much better bastardo - ill man i love your stlye my part of the beam exchange. critts? [Broken External Image]:http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/805/beambabyuq3.jpg
sank - i like it cept the shit under the A looks kinda wack, but i like the rest. rayse - i like also. here's mine, trying to keep it simple. View attachment 275327 the part with the arrows is just pointing to where i didnt know how to finish it off, so if anyone could help me with that.
Habbit - nice simples... where u left a space up the top (where ur arrows point) i reckon you should have connected them all............ that makes no sense... lol Sank - good letter structure, keep it up Rayseone - love it... um? what more can i say?
Sank..no beef...or anything....but every sketch you do...the letters are always exactly the same...just try experimenting with different letter forms...different flows...the way they bend etc. andi also think some of the connections are unesecary too..like the K extension goes to nowhere..same with the back of the N..i dont get it..and also..i think you shud make the A flow with the N abit more too...but...you do have a decent set of letters there...jyst keeping them the same size , width , hight and keep them flowing..and you could be off...just experiment more with different letters and addons..as i dont get the 3 bars at the end of letters...iv gatherd that there only used as a part of the letter...like...a bar...but chopped towards the end...not a addon...like i say....experiment...and if your goind for a euro look..look at alot of euro shit..and study it.. Pantolones..drop the 3d..and try using a ruler for your letters...there wobbily..they are good blocks tho..keep at it..remeber to keep the the same hight blah.. Rayesone..not liking that one..i wanna see more of your shit in your name..its.........whoa okay..i aint posted a pic for ages...and im not at mine..so i logged into my photobucket..and did a lucky dip ! View attachment 275330 uugh..my wall plan.. i sitll didnt get a anwser...shall i go with the cream background again.. im out to put sum kids videos on eBay..make sum monay
HABBIT - NOT nice simples, keep your bars the same width and then they will be nice SANK - good letter structure compared to most people on this forum but it lacks in some parts.. RAYSEONE - letter structure is good, work on making ur letters look good before u add ur wack extensions...because if you take the extensions away the piece is garbage...( im only being mean to you because u understand letter structure and you have potential...im just giving you advise to get better..) EDIT:the e looks good tho, now that i look at it a second time
iv seen sum of ur other ish and i like it,this isnt really working for me, i would lose all the extentions and sort that A out cuss it looks like a dope P wit an odd extention
i critted anuff people today.. her eis the 3 pager...but i couldnt be arsed to do 3...so i just did 2.. View attachment 275333 CRITS and the peice on its own...the pic is kinda small.. View attachment 275334 CREITSSS... <_< :lol:
Rayse, i remember you used to post crazy clean simple shit that was BANGING, i aint feelin that one at all man, way too many nonsense extensions Sank im pretty sure thas the exact sketch i gave crits on at least a week ago, in fact, im positive nothings changed, like i said before, fix the S, watch your width on the A, dont connect the K but keep those ltitle doo-dads, theyre aight in my books Pantalone, good job keepin it simple, but that 3D NEVER works, no one can make that shit look nice, it always endds up looking toy when you add that vanishing point 3D, where it actually connects to the vanishing point...try some straight down 3D or, to the left or right for now ras, edit*! did you just have a blue and black piece before that one? ...i coudla sworn...hmm, wahtever, lol if it says "AMKAH", then the sapce betwen the K and A needs serious work, youre damn good at colouring, which often hides some bad letter structure, but that M is fresh as all hell, best letter youve ever done, just get the others looking like that , and fix and or lose the extension on that A And heres some handstyles just so im not flickless:,, crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/56/bawkbluetagsfn9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2439/youknowhq9.jpg
so the letters are okay tricks...but i need to sort out the A n K spacing...i just see the AH part as a addon..to make my peices look longer...thats all...im getting in how the Bay and Cali And LA peeps doit...like really long names...but dope style and colours throughout...Revok shit...and Evak...i dont kno any others.. anyone that does know sum dope LA , CALI writers PM ..thanks Tricks..im seriously likin the bawkster one..i can see it down a highway did you paint..?..i wanna seeeeee and i did post a blue and white one elier..my wall plan....
word word, whats a "wall plan?" to paint it?, i liked the red shit more yeah i painted, i still need pics of it though yeah man, just the blank space between the A and K, it could be because your tilting the letters, and the H is too small i wouldnt mind seeing you put alot of "random" ( but not too random ) extensions up in that piece, but be confident with them, and make them FAT, unlike thoes little slivers youve got coming out of the left top side of each letter
Some New ish....Sank I like the letters...but the k is too far down compared to the others....or something..make them level.....just my idea... some new yaito fixing the bar problems minus the t..
i wanted to help cezr and tricks thats why im here. :wub: no homo. anyways. deadpoolzer0-work on your letter structures.aiming to the !(?),T,and O.it doesn't flow with the Y and A tricks-the R,and T on the third one look weird.still good stuff. ras-pretty nice.good coloring as tricks said.and yea,the letters need some work. peace.