must- the m still looks weird

crits?
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can control good..
letters...whack

go sketch...then pick up paint..you gotta lot of potential

 

what needs to be changed?

 

MUST- change the M, just change it, that would look hot with a new M

 

This is my first painted throwie, crits please. I didn't have enough paint so I only did an outline. Oh, and the bottom right part of the S is messed up.

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You should blackbook in the meantime. Get a sense of what decent throws look like.

Throw them sketches up!

 

Lose that little bubble, and straighten out your m, make the two dots for the m level.

 

damn somebody was busy, not much to say except what thick said

 

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crits?

 

Your last E looks a bit scrunched and your third letter looks like your last sort of, try making it more legible. Nice one though

 

ayte..get some better pics of your throws, like the other guy said, the E and T look similiar and the E is abit scrunched up..but its ok tho!

 

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first piece

 

ive always felt that this thread is kind of pointless. theres no way in hell that anyone can teach can control over the internet, and otherthen that it make smore sense, in terms of improving letters, to post sketches in the blackbook thread.

 

A crappy throwie.

 

why the hell is it that big

 

tru dat.
Ill have my first throwie up in a bit.
peace.