your stuff is usuall pretty good the one thing i can suggest in my opinion that doesnt look that great which im pretty sure you do on most of your pieces is the way the front part of the R is using part of the T but is completley unattached to it, although i cant check right now im pretty sure thats the only place this happens in your piece (ie everythinmg else is connected) edit: ok just checked and its not the only place this happens except it is very apparent on that part...it sticks out... o ya this is near at my brothers house btw
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your improving so much! a few of those are kidna wack, but wow, the basic letters are actually pretty nicee. alive-that last caer sketch is ncie as fuck, good to see you using extensiosn that dont complteely suck. knewsie- :wub: for fucking real.
alives looking good, liking the c's and a's the most. [Broken External Image]:http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9030/dscn6502nw9.jpg name two features of a limestone pavement. anyone?
clints n grikes baby. haha commented on it in that other thread somewhere. uneek i'd try n keep the letter width consistent. maybe make them all a lil bit fatter. but the bits that stick out are the Es. they have all these diff widths.. dont really work. not too bad tho. just try n make it all a bit smoother.. less harsh n jaggedy maybe
it erodes with rain? emo kid nice odd i like it buique less bars more simple ?? instead of bending with an extra bar just bend the original bar but rumember to keep it width the same all the way round if u do this
[Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7408/basicsbd9.png am i ready for extension i know like i dint put them in a strate line and there is slite hight difference but 24 hours no sleep make methink cba but where do i go with my letters now?
shame , keep workin with that, it looks like its goin somewhere Dream, those already are extensions, lose some of the things on the bottom of the c, and make your lines real clean and itll be nice and sexy, your e on the other hand is just too "pointy" for my liking, its got some nice structure obviously, but yeah, dont be afraid to fuck around with your letters some more im battling krazzie in like a week, but i just freestyled the word "LAUGH" to get an idea of what imma sketch anyways, the battles in black and white, crits?: [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8665/laughvi0.jpg
yh i hope it is going somewhere good. i like ur shizz. at least u've gon somewhere. colour?....think banana yellow, baby pink. beauitful
tricks i dig except the a the thin part of it throws the piece of. otherwise i like it. alive is bringin the heat..dude went and took everybodys advice and started adding and look at that shit. great stuff. the c in the middle sketch is bangin. brought the last one out of retirement