Dusk- work on that S and K anteup- Looks good True- keep working on those simples Chalk- thats so fresh, keep it up [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8025/img1217hw8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8606/img1221en0.jpg constructive crits...? thanks
chalk- i like t he 1st one nice simple with realy good fill and 3d and the secound one is equaly as good i just dont like the fill but that is just my preferance all good tho.
reading a book and I decided to do a character for some reason... coulda been better but I was tired and hungry.... it's suppose to be a yellow guy in a bunny suit View attachment 281026 I am lovin that chalk... the simple yet sophisticated look. looks like you got ur inspiration from Sume... I would say not to copy a lot of ideas, but just play around with the idea and then morph ur letters to the shape of ur mind.BE CREATIVE!! Dizzle - keep it up bro, lovin the fills, maybe just make ur letters more wavey and less jaggy.
yoo 00- thats nice man,if theres a way to make the letters closer without making them look cramped try it fluffy- that bunny is sexy...
Chalk- just noticed tht ur c look more complex than your other letters. Dizzle- i like they way the colours go up in stages, tht second sketchs is hot, and ill try and get my letters closer together. ill play around with em and see whats i gets.
I don't think this was gonna get polled so I am just gonna post it here again... View attachment 281039 Chump
Exchange with dizzzzzlllleeeee D. View attachment 281040 fluffy i usually like your style, but not feeling that one. when you look at it you just see the m.
fluffy- you lost me on tht c the other letters arent bad though garbage- it looks okay a bit weird with the erk part made- work on your letter structure more chalk- those are dope how about an exchange?
Garbage down the way..that E is bascially the same one that Dizzle did.. Fluffy,,,you seriosuly need to define the letters more..they look like fullstops..bars..and lil bars.. gah.. View attachment 281053 any sugestions before i finalise this...i know i need to work on the K big leg.. anything else ?..
I was confused when i seen that K, but now I get it... maybe try a different style, I am not likin this one.
Only mines lowercase.. I just used the same fading out concept because i couldnt think of anything else to do with it, plus its his name, not like im biting him.