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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. [biohazard]

    [biohazard] Member

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    THANK YOU...Sketch I like your exchance for ante just clean it up and fatten some of the bars on the S and the E just a litttlle bit
     
  2. [biohazard]

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    damn man :/ i thought it was original for real...thx for tellin me tho I dun wan people to start thinkin im bitin n shit bro. I rele based the penguin of kenny from southpark tho XD
     
  3. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    haha its alright man I didn't mean to start any beef, keep up those simples :D
     
  4. [biohazard]

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    naw i know you just tryna help bro and ya im just gonna fill a whole page or simple bars tonight hahaha just for the hell of it
     
  5. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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    Can I get any feedback?
     
  6. [biohazard]

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    wing fatten the first part of the W dont bend the N so much it looks like a K and the G u need to fix the lip part its to small and it shouldnt touch the rest of the G i think and dont use color pencils the coloring isnt that great bro
     
  7. Robbie P

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  8. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    dont make the letters jaged like that
     
  9. AVID1

    AVID1 Senior Member

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    good, however I'm not too fond of that 'Siray' thing at the right end of the piece.
    add some shadow/outlines/3d.. I wouldn't colour it though you might ruin it.. (whenever I colour my good pieces I ruin them :()
     
  10. AVID1

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  11. whoarethereal evil

    whoarethereal evil Elite Member

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    it says delt

    thanks anyway
     
  12. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  13. -ShAmEE-

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    make it cleaner..tidy it up.
     
  14. [biohazard]

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    ya sex some of it is to bunched together and its to squigly in some of them make em a lil straighter and cleaner and theyll start comin together also ur 3D isnt good either fix that to
     
  15. Sumoe

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  17. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    I think your retarded. Sezer explained what structure is a couple posts later. Check it out, you might learn some things.
     
  18. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    its a joke calm ur dumbass down
    edit: how bout u show me wat structure is... haha fuckin dumbass
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  19. Sumoe

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    Ante-the "S" and "E" are pretty good, I just think it's kinda weird how the "E" points upward. The "A" and "M" are not very good though, work on those a bit. I like it how they kind of mold into each other. It could be a good style when it's perfected. Keep it up.

    On another note, I said I was gonna do these for a few hours, which I didn't. However, I just finished the big one ten minutes ago.

    [Broken External Image]:http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/160/5/5/Bigger____by_SUMOE.jpg
     
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  20. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    Perfect example of good structure. See, your gettin it.