itd be better if you worked on your R I S and E also your fill is doodoo pick 1 direction and stick with it not fill in every direction go left to right from end to end of the letter na mean?
yeah the fill is pritty shit using left over paint so not alot left. planning to redo fill when i rack more paint. you say improve the letters but liek how? wat direction should i be heading with gettin my trow up beter?
rise umm..dont paint. just go back and just sketch block letters and actually get some sort of structure going on, you'll be amazed at how much it will help. Sore i really like the throw, i like the r alot for some reason. Some super loud and fat and obnoxious fat caps i got off some cans at wall mart.. the flairs are rediculous..i've never actually used a pink dot but it might be comparable to them
My first attempt at a peice. I wanted to see what you all thought about it before I start to add a 3D effect. Sorry about the quality.
The yellow throw up has potential crik. Keep working on itand give your letters more style. Connect them different and form them a little different. Critique?
Um... this is the BOMBS/PIECES FORUM. Meaning using spraypaint. crik an kode take it to the tot blackbook section and stop crowding up painted section. at first look I thought iwritebasic's was on lined paper lol. well anyway: Tonek: looks good, I don't like the writing inside the e though it's a little crowded Torrent: lookin clean. it's pretty good, just try to keep the bars the same size - your A looks the best Tike: looks good, I like the color choices. I'm not sure what that circle on the top right of the I is though?
ok, im gunna give some of the best crit i have ever given, because u have the same problem a lot of people have, including me. at least your rollin right. hittin up the board first instaid of the streets. to me most letter structure is a personal thing, once u get down "basic" letter structure. by the looks of that paint on the wood, i dont think your ready to paint yet. but painting is graffiti at it soul, u cant fight the urge to do it. and i am by no means telling u not to paint. its like telling your barber to cut your hair, but dont use any clippers. my advice to u is just have fun fuckin around with it. dont worry about what other people think, shit, its your board and u want to paint so hit it. i think u need to put painting 2nd and hit the black books first. work on simples. everyone says "that is simple" and yes' your right, its simple...but not balanced. keep your letters even with your thickness. try to make it perfect. once thats perfect, then do it again. strive for perfection. finish a sketch, find spots u dont like or u think u can fix, and draw it again. and again. and again. u can take the best artist on the planet, the guy painting realistic paintings and abstract stuff, but put him to graffiti and its like hes back to 5 years old with some crayons. this shit takes work. but if u love it, its worth every second. not to get off subject here. the whole point here is not to rush shit. take your time. get your skill down to a science. then start hitting the streets. all graffiti is based on the most simple form of the letters. get that down and everything will fall into place like building blocks. your progressing as best as i can find flick wise is here \/ [Broken External Image]:http://www.slanted.de/images/glance158ip.jpg -Fube-
= phenom - not bad, sketch more though sore, fresh bomb, and a sexy pic, keep it up rise, stop painting on wood stonk, faster hands torrent, looks well painted, just sketch more for better letters GKFam...Grab Kash Family, Westoe and Bawk. [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3083/westandbawkgkfambk0.jpg crits?
did my first piece today i really fucked it up this is wat its suppose to look like: painted: after that pick got mad went over it: i kno i could of did alot better its just my thins didnt work on the 99cent cans so ifucked it up i just gotta practice some more o yea i hate plywood too it make the paint look wierd
[Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y85/XxMykillxX/nes1.jpg first actual painted throwup. crits?