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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. tonentink

    tonentink Senior Member

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  2. [breakout]-azer

    [breakout]-azer Senior Member

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    i gt realy bad crits on a previos peice.

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    crits and it it any beter?
     
  3. MoLD

    MoLD Senior Member

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    itd be better if you worked on your R I S and E
    :D
    also your fill is doodoo
    pick 1 direction and stick with it
    not fill in every direction
    go left to right from end to end of the letter
    na mean?
     
  4. [breakout]-azer

    [breakout]-azer Senior Member

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    yeah

    the fill is pritty shit using left over paint so not alot left. planning to redo fill when i rack more paint.

    you say improve the letters but liek how? wat direction should i be heading with gettin my trow up beter?
     
  5. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    rise umm..dont paint. just go back and just sketch block letters and actually get some sort of structure going on, you'll be amazed at how much it will help.

    Sore i really like the throw, i like the r alot for some reason.

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v377_Canonfilmer_DSCF1207.jpg

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v377_Canonfilmer_DSCF1216.jpg

    Some super loud and fat and obnoxious fat caps i got off some cans at wall mart.. the flairs are rediculous..i've never actually used a pink dot but it might be comparable to them
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  6. ras

    ras Banned

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    Who can see the Smug tag and LSD tag in this..?..
    i hope you never wnt over them..?..
     
  7. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    yea i was just about to say i hope that you didnt go over lsd..
     
  8. Kode

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    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_Kode_1.jpg

    My first attempt at a peice. I wanted to see what you all thought about it before I start to add a 3D effect. Sorry about the quality.
     
  9. iwritebasic

    iwritebasic Senior Member

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    ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a149_stjames91_jmess2.jpg

    hot spot, first time painting again in like 2 months
     
  10. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    Draw it on paper. then use your drawing as a guide line... just take your time. you'll get it..
     
  11. Torrent

    Torrent Senior Member

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    The yellow throw up has potential crik. Keep working on itand give your letters more style. Connect them different and form them a little different.

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    Critique?
     
  12. Make•

    Make• Senior Member

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    Um... this is the BOMBS/PIECES FORUM. Meaning using spraypaint. crik an kode take it to the tot blackbook section and stop crowding up painted section. at first look I thought iwritebasic's was on lined paper lol.

    well anyway:
    Tonek: looks good, I don't like the writing inside the e though it's a little crowded

    Torrent: lookin clean. it's pretty good, just try to keep the bars the same size - your A looks the best

    Tike: looks good, I like the color choices. I'm not sure what that circle on the top right of the I is though?
     
  13. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ok, im gunna give some of the best crit i have ever given, because u have the same problem a lot of people have, including me.

    at least your rollin right. hittin up the board first instaid of the streets. to me most letter structure is a personal thing, once u get down "basic" letter structure. by the looks of that paint on the wood, i dont think your ready to paint yet. but painting is graffiti at it soul, u cant fight the urge to do it. and i am by no means telling u not to paint. its like telling your barber to cut your hair, but dont use any clippers. my advice to u is just have fun fuckin around with it. dont worry about what other people think, shit, its your board and u want to paint so hit it. i think u need to put painting 2nd and hit the black books first. work on simples. everyone says "that is simple" and yes' your right, its simple...but not balanced. keep your letters even with your thickness. try to make it perfect. once thats perfect, then do it again. strive for perfection. finish a sketch, find spots u dont like or u think u can fix, and draw it again. and again. and again. u can take the best artist on the planet, the guy painting realistic paintings and abstract stuff, but put him to graffiti and its like hes back to 5 years old with some crayons. this shit takes work. but if u love it, its worth every second. not to get off subject here. the whole point here is not to rush shit. take your time. get your skill down to a science. then start hitting the streets. all graffiti is based on the most simple form of the letters. get that down and everything will fall into place like building blocks. your progressing as best as i can find flick wise is here \/
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    -Fube-
     
  14. TricksForKids

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  15. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    did my first piece today i really fucked it up
    this is wat its suppose to look like:
    ai79.photobucket.com_albums_j138_AIRGEE2302_bs052.jpg
    painted:
    ai79.photobucket.com_albums_j138_AIRGEE2302_DSCN0563.jpg
    after that pick got mad went over it:
    ai79.photobucket.com_albums_j138_AIRGEE2302_DSCN0564.jpg
    i kno i could of did alot better its just my thins didnt work on the 99cent cans so ifucked it up i just gotta practice some more

    o yea i hate plywood too it make the paint look wierd
     
  16. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    i think you need a bigger piece of plywood
     
  17. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    yea i know im just gonna do single letters on that one now
     
  18. xSilencio

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  19. capitol

    capitol Senior Member

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    Is it all green or did u do that end of the T with another color..if so then thats some smooth shit:p
     
  20. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    haha no thats just the flash