gritty ish following sezer's lettering tut: [Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6341/untitleduo4.png
sampl- the letters got lots of potential to grow into greater styles, clean it up a bit and fuck around with it bump for crits
colors arent gud, the orang an red go gud but the green forcefeild and that kind of pink jus dont go, the drips are off, the m is pretty bad, and the n lukks like a p
BORG -- I like the rounded flow and overall balance of the piece. not too kin to the thin, long extenstions, work on those. Right side of the M seems kinda wierd, the joint that juts back seems out of place. the O had lots of positive space moreso than the other letters, maybe the hole needs to be bigger? looks good though.
Borg i like the colors just fine. but i feel like your lower case N is bring you down some make it a capital and should be fly. and my entry for this dino battle that i still know nothing about...
Morn:likeing the R Chalk sick shit mann, [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6053/graf290xp2.jpg Crits would be nice..i need tot ry and fix this...
fix the e and the r, they got potential but dont follow the height of the nv, try a lowercase e and let the connection of the r happen twords the v, not the end of the r, try that and see how it looks, other than that is straight
i like that borg. nice colors. that character is awesome chalk. u shuld enter the battle. knews...well you already know. envr make them strait up and down and use some bendy bars well heres my sketch i did at 3 am and reall high. enjoy
Right, i'm very new and was told to post in here by ALIVE for some advice from you guys! [Broken External Image]:http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4194/dejawt5.jpg
well.. Baze.. like the style your going for...i love the Z...but i dont like the E.. Knewsince...i like that bottom simple....but the LEMON peice is a no no.. Chalk...dope dope dope...but the spray effect looks like a puff of wind.. and VICE....do you ever post pictures?.. ugh...work in progress.. View attachment 283176 ALL CRITS WELCOME.. IM AT THE STAGE OF TOUCHING IT UP !
The bottom two fingers don't really match up with the rest of the character, too undetailed. I like the rest.
the g is a bite of an NY bomber jon156 maybe not a bite but theres a resemblance eh you probabaly didnt bite it, just sortve looks like it
nice dont like the middle bit of the m... quick one...says stephy..well i've done the STEP so nearly there...need help on the p!