5 minute peice, positive crits please
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use the same bars on each letter repeat the bar to make tha otha letter iight? see how the e and a dont match wit tha same style the i and m flow pretty gud, but the s is all alone in its style

 

that would be quite a meen simple piece you mind if i steal the s lol jkn

 

this reminds me of bouncing soul a long time ago,
except with uneven widths of letters,
the m is too big, beyond that.
id say keep going, youll be kind of ehh for awhile.
but willll eventually get good.
freallll.

 

Im gonna bump this. Only feedback I got was to go simple...

 

sole, make the bottom of the l longer. other than that it's pretty good, the e's a little weird but i dunno what could make it better. harsh work on your handy too

 

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whats with all the people writing sick names

asma
coma
lol whats next throat hurt

 

Hester sounds like Molester ?..

..ill crit later

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gettin creative widdit..
isit worth finalising ?..!!

 

yea i say it is worth finishing , oh and i know hester sounds like molester or easster

 

the K's terrible, and its too bubbly, and its diagonal which pisses me off, lol, nah but for real that K sucks homie, the A and M are money though, youve come a long way


the sheep and reach go back to simples..i dont know how thats "wu tang inspired" but theyd probably slam your arm in a car door if they saw that.

and mersi, that M is nice man, and the e, keep workin in that fat sexy style, make all the letters the same size


sole, i like those letters actually, just dont connect them at the top, and keep working on that throw

 

oh yeah..i never even noticed about the K Tricks...god damn...ahaha...isit the way the K is curved..and the rest aint...and the peice is diagonol cuz i gotta fit Anroe..9Rider..Duse and Freak on...its the 12oz International Bulk Exchange started by myself...hehehehe

 

i actually really like the M-K connection. however the random shit comming out of your A and K, not so much.

 

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critrisiums plz,. i got bettr huh?!?!

 

ahah Thanks Tricks...Alive....and those bits are menna be stars...youll be able to see better when i have filled it...i was " gettin creative " .. hehehe..

im out...ill be back with the finished LOAD lateerrr

 

zjfhs

Krispy- looks pretty crispy mannn. haha looks good.

Just tryin out a new style let me know what everyone thinks. I like it.
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crits?

 

edited go dooooooooooooooown

 

krisssssssspy i like it a lot, if u only took a LITTLE bit more time to make everything even, and connect the bars, theyd be dope dope simples. same for the throws actually.

dizzle. . . . . o god.

 

tricks i agree that is shogun is shit but i think he ment its wu inspired by the word 'shogun' if it makes scense?

*this was to tricksforkids on that shogun sheep shit *