(bad picture the camera was being gay so used my phone) crits? mast- i like it but not sure on thelast cuple of letters
block letters none of that from the last 3 people is good so just like evry ones going to tell you do the letters from your keyboard but after a year or 2 you should develop a style but i doubt youlll be into graff for a year
base ... keep working. the letters look very uneven. try making them all the same size scab ... i like the last pic. the pink throw with all the faces. looks nice. now dont be too harsh cus this is the first time i tried anything this style. and i ran out of room for the M... and it looks even worse cus for some reason my camera made it look all choppy.
tazm- i think the letters would look good if you striped them off all the add ons and little extentions, just get your letters perfectly formed the way you want them to look like then started addig bits to them.
thats dope...i might enter the battle now...i just dont have any colors to do a full color lol EDIT:heres wat i just did quikly...not final ...crits? View attachment 284869
you also need a better camera shot taste lol but it looks good but i cant see much knews- fire like usual tazm- do simples mr maze- do simples everyone else keep doing wat your doing but try to make it look better heres something i just went with quickie like 5 minutes its garbage but ill probably take my time next time and make it look better
eske, if that third letter is supposed to be an E. it really doesnt look like one. the P had a shred of hope, but it kinda just goes downhill from there. Take your time with the next one. and i would suggest trying some new bar combinations for that S.
tense heres dajam. [Broken External Image]:http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/PICT0256.jpg eske one- i cant make out what the third letters is. For now try to keep your bars the same size i have seen better from you. Mr. tasty- thats pretty ill, id like to see it all cleaned up. tazm- what happened you had some pretty decent simples a page ago and now this. go back to what you were doing work on those letters more. mrmaze- simple basic letters, use your keyboard as a refrence. base- the same for you man. scab- not really feeling the throwie. mast- on the top piece the o and m are decent nice simple ish but the rest is not that good. simpler letters. example:
ok...needin sum help... im doin a sketch for tha asek battle, the fill on mah letters is an avacado green, for the 3d im thinkin of fadin purple ta a dark pink...wat should the forcefield be?
Edward..god helpful crits man !!! congrats on MOD too !..keep up the good work !! Mast....do simples...no letters going into themselves or shit like that yeah Breakout Azr.....it looks pretty clean etc.....just work on basic letering etc.....i like the stars .... theyre very well drawn Dajam ... has the BEST BLOCK LETTERS IN THE WOOOOOORLD ESKE...fort you wasnt posting ne more...hehe..i kind hve to agre.the curly things ruind it...keep up the barism tho matey Tasty....get a better pic man...i can see you using blocks which is good..from what i see it looks nice...get a better pic !!! ahah Tamz...resize that thing MrMaze...you gonn be told this over and over drop your colours pick up your pencil get out a ruler mark out two parrelel horizontal lines draw BLOCKS inbetween them use bars for each letter look in the new 2 graff thread for help on bars and then ittl look nice and simplelike this MRMAZE its boring..but it will help you Cali...do what i told MRMAZE to do damn..big ass crit.. View attachment 284950 hehe..bump cuz it took me a looooooong time iv done another page but i carnt scan in right now.. crits welcome ideas on the next pages ? etc. etc. Peaceee
Bump, I don't have colors either lol. I'm probably just going to send it in with some filled in 3d. Also, unrelated but, I love your characters too dude. Alright, planning on doing this handie in between to fill up that space "True to your roots" Kinda sloppy and the letters need a biiiit work. Oh well View attachment 284955 Putting it in between here by the way View attachment 284956
shamee- your E's are slightly different shapes, and your letters also get slightly larger as you go. but you gotta love the simples! keep it. oh and a final though i think you should do your W with a point in the middle instead of that flipped back E look you have goin on there. just my 2 cents. and you aefx - learn from shamee.
the worst thing ever is when you bump sumthing.....do a huge crit...and its at the bottom of the damn fucking page aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh View attachment 284962 last bump like i say any other ideas for the next page etc ?