hahaha that sucks. thanks for the crits though. i'll keep workin on it. teze - your tag is always hot. the bottom SAIN looks better than the top one (mainly the S) but the top E is better than the bottom. siran - i would say to make a basic tag. all even sized, simple letters, then start tweakin from there. the I with the big circle for the dot needs work. just find a different way to dot it or capitalize it. and yeah curves, curves.
maso - your style is ill some - try workin on your m here's some of my stuff...crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/762/003008ap5.jpg
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jers top one is dope...but the bottom one looks like aers not realy a toy tag...but il post it anyway
SiZo-id say go a bit more simple for now. try to keep the letters the same size. like the i should be in line with the rest of the letters. Also lose the add on for now.
sizo-basics i went basics when i first started and just kept it that way jers-dope tag but way to much goin on for me and might take a while on the street me stuff: [Broken External Image]:http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/1971/l57766151c1f51c81bde693cu2.jpg stainerrsss [Broken External Image]:http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/4673/la19d063425334d7a98be5cqr4.jpg 1/2 n 1/2 crits?
jers - at 1st i liked the top one but when i saw the top part was a huge extension off the E, it struck as a little weird. the bottom one is nice but the J would read an A to me if i didn't know your name. you could do without a lot of the extensions on that one too.. the crown.. 3 quotation marks is odd. i would jus keep the underline and star for that one. sizo - do what tri says tasty - i can't read that. i see a T and a E... whats with all the photoshop effects? mesn - the bottom one on the yellow sign is nice. i'm not sure about the dots. jus seems like drawin out 4 circles takes time. maybe just a star on the end? the streaker tag - the MES is nice then it looks like you got a little uncomfortable writin the N and the arrow looks a little shaky.
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alright guys, i write stak now cause i was vice, disliked it, tried sake, found out he was a legend, and ended up here. well these are the tags I've come up with. [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20561.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20551.jpg and i know their pretty much the same pics its just i wanted to show all of the lines but still have you be able to see the tags. so what do you guys think? crits? oh and for my crits, ilikepie: i like it except for the last letter. i cant tell what that is. is it an L? deg: you have really improved. im lovin it, its got good flow and the ink looks like its great. and tasty: i can only really read the E but just lookin at it it looks good haha. edit: and i know that the last K's on both of the pics are fucked up. edit #2: im not so sure about the T. ive been messin around with it for a while and i cant seem to come up w/ anything for it.
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oh i see. taste. took me a little while to find the S since its so damn wide i thought i was lookin at 2 letters. ran - thats a nice one liner dega - i dont really like how the arrow jus comes out of the E like that (jus like morne's E) maybe if you do a little loop or flourish first or somthing but the tag is lookin better. vice - the A and K are your best letters. i think you should try switch up the S and T. try and put some curves in it instead of so many hard straight lines. aefx - i see the thought in tryin to make the letters connect but they connect oddly to me. it needs more flow IMO. and you got a buttload of extensions on it.. 2 dots on the sides, underline with 3 dots, halo with quotes. jus pick one or two.
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fube you gota do me a handy in that style haha. at first i couldnt read it for shit but now it pops out (or you made it a little simpler). pretty dope. but why do you always put the circle over the middle?