Say shiz? i like it alot though. nice and clean. shadow seems a lil off but im one to talk. nice flow, nice throw.=]
not a waste at all. but, i would watch out with that "ja". might not be worth puttin that out man. i hope u know what i mean.
keep beef in the beef thread - love ed. My first painted piece Crits please [Broken External Image]:http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_4334.jpg Differnt angle
1st i could run around saying such things as "work on letter structure,try cut backs, fix your 3D" but i refrain, as to minimise the spam, if someone else has already said it then i dont see a reason for me to repeat it just to up my post count. 2nd, i can edit the inventory flick out if you wish. 3rdly, thanks for the feedback. Volume, after u fixed the 3D up on the right hand leg of the m, go over the aura again with the white so that there isnt overspray in your aura, you get me? i find pieces from the ground up are harder, try to keep all the letters the same size and proportional,dont worry so much about crazy adons and little tweaks as of yet, simple outlines with dope fills are just as effective and look good.
bump for the homie mants. nice work man keep going whaha what did you expected? this is like his 3th post. you dont have to critisize the whole forum first before you may post some shit up
soumyd...that looks alot like Bore's painted ish he does on freights....but you do have simalar styles....anwyas...it looks nice....but dont be sooo quick with the fill....scratch fills on those things dont loook right....uugh...i dont know..keep up i guess..i love your handy tho..if it is yours....peepin in..get a better flick...it looks niiiceee
Thx for the crits I thought I keep it pretty simple and I thought my lines where pretty clean and I do agree my M needs work And as for my letters size I made them that size like lower case and capital letters no what i mean And I've been trying to make some type of cool fill but i dont want to do some weak two tone and i dont want to put bubbles or x's. I guess it all takes work i mean this is my first painting (outside)
seriously dont go around painting JA its too famous man... on the jast throwie try and make the letters the same size and in a straight line
Wow, nicely done. All things considered you did very well with the space provided. Although you had at least it looks like you did have an area constraint, your piece does not look cluttered in the least bit. The fill is simplistic but it was done with class. Anyways keep it up. -Stinky-
hungr man...i love your style that throw is too ill man.... in my opinion you don't need crits you got it down pattt... keep up the good work.
Near..i love how the peice goes round the wall..the R so to speak..and i love how you and Hungr ACTUALLY get up..!!!!... for the first time i can actually say it to someone who does.. STAYUP !
RYSEK throwie just wanted to know what others think of my rysek throwie... please criticise so i can improve... (done with spanish montana very quickly) and no its not on a road lol... PEACE [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8902/cimg0263rp2.jpg
ryse: hit the books homie, throws are very hard to make look good. ive been working on mine for weeks and its still trash. just keep working on your letters you can control looks ight ive seen alot worse. your letters are shit though, everyone on here is going to tell you the exact same thing. if your going to paint it though least it looks like you have a good place to practice in a drainage ditch or something. just keep your painting there until you improve, hit the tot black book thread with some drawn throws. the people on here will help you out alot, some are dicks but most really help. but remember if you want critz, tell some other people what you think they could improve on. -kelio
I started writeing just a few weeks ago anyways heres some of my stuff. (ignore the doodles of the sides of pages youll be able to tell what i want you to look at) And for the colors i used decicolor paint markers. Oh and please give me some feed back. Thanks http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/158/dscf0159rw4.jpg http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9444/dscf0161zj0.jpg http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9699/dscf0162gf2.jpg http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2699/dscf0163yp0.jpg
start simple and go to the tot black book thread whn you are drawing. and check out the new to graff thread. your shits to cluttered.