write it without connecting the s and y

 

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#1 or #2 crits?

 

Bump to new page, I only got a response from one person

 

sewn i like 3 and 6 the best

 

Not to be a dick. But Blase, and also for most other people who posted on this page. Completley ignore what melo said.

Write your tag out like this: BLASE over, and over and over, and the letters will start to warp on their own. Talking about flow and arrows and shit all comes LATER. When you have decent letter styles. Different ways you can tweak them so they look nice.

This advice has been posted in this topic over and over, and it will probably be posted thousands more. Stay simple until you have decent letter formation.

 

i like it a lot sank. the k could use some work tho i think

critsticles?
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farkkkk love the drips man, make the c a bit bigger though.



As I was gettin of the train, quick. Yeh I fucked up the R
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i can see what you were goin for with the r, and i like it. and thats a dope S.

which one you like more?

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Roolete - I like the first one more... but... change the middle line in the "E", and the second last letter (R I think). Also, that S is killer! Simple but effective!
Roms - You sexy cunt.
Sank - Not bad bro. Clean it up a bit, the K and the A ecspecially. But otherwise its coming along.

I was going for some flowy styles with this so tell me what you think!
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CaMa, I like it.

bump for crits.

 

I likes these. Define the second a more though, it gets a bit too much like an 'o' now.

 

first time with new name.

 

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Crits?

 

TAZM- No offence, but that whole thing sucks. It's horrible. Stick to paper for a while, or maybe a name change was a bad idea.

But anyways, who want's to see a crap tag I did while I was fucked up? It's actually not too bad, but still sucks, I'm surprised it isn't worse.

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Remember, don't take pills and go paint. I don't even remember doing this tag, haha. But oh well, it's funny to look at.

 

Crit for Tazm: Stick to paper at first like Rogue said. I like the T and A but it gets worse with the Z and M.

 

rogue - not bad for being fucked up

tazm - stick to papper for a while, push your letters closer together and make them flow

crits?


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I don't know about that arrow. Everything else looks nice though. I dig that K. Crits for me? (It's up a couple posts)

 

its not a k its a R

i purposely didnt give you crits becuz you didnt give them out but since im a nice guy ill give you some lol

you should try to space your letters out a bit and make them a bit higher becuz on some of the pics it look just like lil squiggles, you have got a whole peice of paper dont be afraid to use it. also just let your hand flow, to me it looks too sharp, just let your hnd do the work man, write your tag outr around 100 times just in normall writing and slowly things will come in here and there