evade if you want to battle then by all means, im game. i can, but i like this style better. ive tried all the fancy letters and shit. better flow? i paused a little on the s. View attachment 288984
im just trying to give u crits and im giving you my honest opinion that i dont like it and it could be better if u wanna battle go for it i haven't a clue how to officially battle or what goes down but w.e
[Broken External Image]:http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/messinaround.jpg bump for crits roolete - that last S doesn't look like an S. alko - that really does look like ALKY blase - dont be so concerned with trying to connect your letters. the dont have to
my crit to u is..STOP WASTING THAT INK ON PAPER :O looks juicy...oh and resize the pics they are hard to see.. but from wat i can see...looks like u need to go simpler.and maybe change the A to a little a
not bad...good that ur tryin out simple...try put them abit closer together and try workin some flow into it...just experiment with slight changes and itl evolve soon
i agree 100% with mr.tasty thought i'd also throw in that you should slowly add style to the letters, and save add-ons(if you need or want) for later on when you have a solid handstyle.
in all honesty, the G's odd/weak and the U looks kind of like a over extened L. but other than that your on the right track maybe add closeness and abit more style... its takes a while to coem up with a handy your 100% happy with.
Yo Zyklon homie this is his tag, painted, couple hours ago crits? not my tag, but Zyklons [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/33/dsc01168ps7.jpg
vers why dont u try like connectin or bendin ur ltters differently yours are just simple keyboard letters
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im diggin ur simple the other one on the other hand needs to loos the quotes and halo then itll be good (the zork one)