me and my buddy, thought I'd do a charcter styling of us. Just for kicks. Stickers of thats coming.

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This stuff is some semi-realistic stylized stuff that Ive been playing around with.

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Pretty please for crits?

-Paste

 

not really feelin it the second one is ok but i still dont feel them maybe try to study a lil anatomy or something. anyone got any crits for me?

 

Dont know if I should post these here
Could I get some citz on the letters, thanks

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not bad emjay, but yeah you need to work on the cleanliness of your letters. No pun intended. heres another octopus-related thing.

 

does that say boner? i like it emjay keep it up. i think a dark uni on the first one would be sick

 

bump for crits, didnt get any

 

haha no it says "aoner" but it does look like boner. I really have to work on that. Hitting trains is prolly not the best thing for me to do.

 

emjay shits llooks good,didnt like the color on the first one,couldnt read all the letter

 

im feeling it fin.its original

 

fuck it
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This might sound weird but do you play halo?

 

Mess around

Just stuff I came up last night. What do you think? New tag and stuff.

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very good start ceok! original name and very simple proportionate letters. Something we don't see much around here...

 

Ah, thanks! I was scared to get shit crits again.

 

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problem solved

 

thats what I was gunna do

thanks tho ehee

 

fin man, thanks for the crits, I have been working on my anatomy, but they fucking cut that class next year, so Ive just been going from books. I dont know, hopefully they get it back by the time I'm a junior. Anyways, thats some damn fine work on that mesa vomiting karak tag. Its really fresh and well done. Much props, doesnt prolly mean much from me though...
-Paste

 

Not bad man, your on a good start, Now i would start messing around with your letters and see if yu can start kicking a style, But overall its good.